This is an unusual preview: It includes a version of Part 3C: The Vanthampur Investigations that is technically complete, but which I then realized was broken.
It works, but basically there's a glaring logic error that you can't unsee once you see it:
- I wanted to use the Hamhocks Slaughterhouse as the place where the murders are being committed.
- But it's outside the gates, and it doesn't make sense for the murderers to smuggle refugees out of the city, murder them, and then smuggle them back in.
- My initial intention was to just move the slaughterhouse inside the gates. Easy fix.
- But then I remembered that hooved beasts aren't allowed inside the city, which means there can't be a slaughterhouse in the city.
So I'm going to have to take a hatchet to this bit and rebuild it before I can post it to the website. But the structural stuff is all accurate, so I thought it might be of interest to you!
colin r
2020-04-05 02:30:25 +0000 UTCJustin Alexander
2020-04-04 07:05:36 +0000 UTC