Draft - "Taur Punk" Comic page 1
Added 2023-01-19 18:07:35 +0000 UTCFoxinuhhbox loves cyberpunk and taurs and so do I, so this comic was destined to happen. We've had a lot of fun designing the characters and doing worldbuilding. Now it's all coming together.
We'd love feedback because we're trying to make sure our page templates and stuff are all good. So, do let us know in the comments if anything needs to be improved.
So far, one person has said that the speech bubble style being so square makes it seem like Fiona, here, might have robotic speech.
Comments
Your insights led to some good fixes and I think you'll enjoy the updated page when it comes out next week. Thank you for looking it over!
Zmeydros
2023-01-22 16:19:05 +0000 UTCLoving it so far. I can kind of see what someone's saying about the speech bubbles; I think it's a combination of the square text box and that font that makes it seem robotic. But it could also just be a stylistic thing that people need to overlook. That being said, the one thing that slightly bugs me is the lack of capitalization at the beginning of sentences and the random capitalized works in the middle. But all in all, a solid template!
Arkona Kothe
2023-01-20 07:59:05 +0000 UTC
