A Novel Approach chapter 17
Added 2024-08-20 20:03:26 +0000 UTCFirst time breaking in an getting to know Bonnie.
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Good lord, this dual identity plan will go insanely poorly. It's incredible he thinks it's sustainable, especially if he's not going to stop at low level felonies, and mix in some infidelity too. Kim might literally try to kill him.
thaughton2
2024-08-21 00:17:08 +0000 UTCEdge isn't a morality, it's an aesthetic. Like the Joker is a straight up monster but he isn't even slightly edgy, and Batman is a hero and a total edgelord.
Malcolm Tent
2024-08-20 23:47:02 +0000 UTCAlso. Why is being evil or doing bad things edgy?? -.- it makes me wonder why people call characters that WANT to be villains edgelords? Do you not think people can be inherently a shitty person that is selfish and doesn't care about other people? A lot of real people are like that… has nothing to do with trying to be edgy. People are just fucking terrible sometimes. Sorry for the rant.
Tom
2024-08-20 23:43:30 +0000 UTCI don't like the whole dual persona thing. Its gonna backfire so hard in his face.. And I'm already cringing at how bad it'll be. The good guy persona is useless except for pleasing Kim. He could do everything he wants while being a villian, except being a boyfriend with Kim. Its a huge risk with no reward. He might as well drink the Dr. Jekyll potion if he wants to split his personality lol. 🤡 Anyway, I much prefer bonnie. Crazy bitch that can be made into HIS crazy bitch.. No need to hide who he REALLY is. Cause that's what he's doing with Kim. Hiding his TRUE self because he wants some grade A pussy. I can't see it going any other way. Kim will find out and it's gonna blow up in his face. 😔 Loved the little heist! Quick and easy. Hope he gets more in touch with that darker side of his. Overall good chapter.
Tom
2024-08-20 23:40:25 +0000 UTC> dad can ball his secretary I'd phrase this differently. > “Ok, jesus Jesus should be capitalized. > a piece of work.” Unnecessary quotation mark.
Joshua Graham
2024-08-20 21:03:01 +0000 UTC
