Loving the fat shota with thick maid. Hope to see pregnancy someday.
scorpionius
2021-04-22 00:52:08 +0000 UTC
ぼっちゃまのケツエロい
ブリ道
2021-04-21 21:25:05 +0000 UTC
I realize it could also be "Hey, it's that guy from earlier. You're late in delivering the pizza."
2021-04-21 18:52:39 +0000 UTC
For just proofreading,
Ironically, even though in the last one I said to use "the young master" in this one, in her referring directly to him, she could use "young master"
so it could be
"Ahhh <3 Young master's dick is so amazing! Please fuck my pussy more!~<3"
"Hey, that's the guy from earlier. You're late bringing me pizza."
should be
"Hey, it's that guy from earlier. You're late in delivering me my pizza."
You use me to refer to yourself (the young master), and his pizza.
For the "Thank you for your time. I'm having sex..." part.
I would re-word it to
"Ah, Thank you for the delivery. Payment? Ahh<3. Sorry, I am currently serving the young master with my body, so it will have to wait until the young master is finished. Please have a seat while you wait, the young master can go for quite some time~<3"
I would change the "te-he" to "Heh"
"te-he (tee-hee)" is a more feminine action / sound
Rax15 is right on the scream.
2021-04-21 16:50:11 +0000 UTC
It should be "I want you to scream loud enough to be heard from the next room"
