laundromat
Added 2020-12-17 17:58:44 +0000 UTCthank you for proofreading!
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The first sentence is good. The second is good as well. You can cut out anyway. Replace: "I've been milking" with: I lactate when they're swollen" Second paragraph is good. The rest is good too.
dasism
2020-12-19 01:31:17 +0000 UTCミルク交換すれば良いのかな？飲んで飲ませて。(*ﾉωﾉ) ん～、良いでか乳輪と乳首！
にゃんにけ
2020-12-17 22:15:11 +0000 UTC「お断りよ」の部分が省略されている様ですが、"No way."などとするとより拒絶感が増すと思います。字数の都合で入らないかも知れませんが。
オパイ（お仕事募集中）
2020-12-17 22:01:40 +0000 UTCTrade her cock milk for breast milk
stevejzzz
2020-12-17 21:14:45 +0000 UTCThe dialogue is good
zuper
2020-12-17 19:16:18 +0000 UTC
