Liyue02-150p
Added 2025-10-03 11:30:54 +0000 UTC
Comments
Sex sequence is getting predictable and rigidly methodical. They are still amazingly fluid, but less and less excitement unless you can add more "spice" to each character. And you need better control over the pacing instead of constant and non-stop creampie. They're not bad, just too much. More story elements needed, even if it's cheating, ntr, or stalking, etc. Leave some rooms for the girl to either touch herself alone then suddenly got pierced from behind maybe. Or playing with the hair and neck while kissing from behind. I saw some pretty decent work from other creators such as "神奇牛子" especially with their Cecilia work or " Gragas743" with their Ntr direction. Check them out if you haven't already. "GRAY" also used to be good until they botched their original style. Please don't take offense to my complaints. I simply tried to give suggestions since I really like your work and want to continue to support you.
Dusk
2025-10-05 10:45:21 +0000 UTC椰羊应该要喷奶
国志 黄
2025-10-04 02:01:16 +0000 UTC
