Chapter 2183
Added 2022-09-28 12:34:43 +0000 UTCComments
Great chapter. Edit suggestions . The Ghosthound had seen a version of what you may become, -' should has not had. - It’s a white-furred hare. Anthropomorphic. When it smiles, its teeth are needles. It moves like blood spurting out of a wound. When it smiles, its teeth resemble needles. It wears a crimson coat.” You've included when it smiles it's teeth are needles twice.
TwistedVanity
2023-04-14 20:36:24 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2022-09-28 20:20:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2022-09-28 20:06:13 +0000 UTCOffering prayers Chris please stay safe.
Whale
2022-09-28 16:46:45 +0000 UTCI doubt I will be reading more after this for a long while. Unless the hurricane does something weird it is heading straight for me.
Chris
2022-09-28 15:43:39 +0000 UTCThe cosmos experiences time like Rand
Ron Whitlatch
2022-09-28 15:23:05 +0000 UTCI cant remember if it was addressed at all how the alpha cosmos timeline is moving during this whole memory arc like wasnt the patron of feathers dying with like a month left I understand she got better as he was going through the memories but hasn't randidly been in the memories for like months now
drink mer
2022-09-28 14:56:44 +0000 UTCWelp, the chains are a part of her alright. Hopefully repurposed for the memory version of Devick.
Joel Matos
2022-09-28 13:19:37 +0000 UTCDifferent time zones. Still getting used
Geozstevenzz
2022-09-28 12:47:24 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2022-09-28 12:34:54 +0000 UTC