Chapter 1793
Added 2021-06-16 04:36:21 +0000 UTCComments
Are all these high powered people obgyn’s or what lol. Please change that before it goes to print. Webster definition: “an instrument inserted into a body passage especially to facilitate visual inspection or medication. “ So either all these people are tools for vaginal examination or you need to change it.
Trebuchet
2022-07-27 22:38:14 +0000 UTCThis is a little hugh for the last 100 chapter are basically all about claudette, claudette here and here is zzz, does she even matter? why she so prominant now? why be so involved in her when she "useless" in his much more multiple priority goal and she doesnt really matter in the end, after killing knight Helen character i feel we get a repeat (and bad) of her here with claudette now, its a little zzz because they are no real basis for her becoming so prominant in the story, her starting intro for her getting in the story are a little miss in my view, the writting after is perfect, but with the lacking starting basis its a little meh, same thing with our MC lover who come out of nowhere with no real basis, feel forced
Zarik0
2021-10-14 05:21:49 +0000 UTCis Randidly ever going to fix his arm
hope22
2021-06-18 02:23:41 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters
nethernight11
2021-06-16 06:51:38 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-06-16 06:42:42 +0000 UTC'Not that he was' -> 'Not now that he was' OR that -> when
Corwin Amber
2021-06-16 06:06:33 +0000 UTCWOHOO!!!
SunderGoldmane
2021-06-16 05:35:19 +0000 UTCPost corrections as a reply to the first comment made by the author, it shows up as a different notification for him.
SunderGoldmane
2021-06-16 05:35:07 +0000 UTC'Not that he was' -> 'Not now that he was' OR that -> when
Corwin Amber
2021-06-16 05:16:31 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters
Alexander Dupree
2021-06-16 05:07:23 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2021-06-16 04:36:35 +0000 UTC
