Chapter 1775
Added 2021-05-28 03:42:01 +0000 UTCComments
"Shal, take the rest of your squad back to the base to recuperate. Each force the Swacc Family sends after you seems to mysteriously fail." These sentences should be reversed or the pronouns moved. It seems to imply Shal causes this not Randidly.
Nahvis Gen
2021-06-01 08:38:45 +0000 UTC"emotional affect leaked" affect -> effect
Nahvis Gen
2021-06-01 08:23:44 +0000 UTCI think that was foreshadowing for Helens domain
MurkyTruths
2021-05-28 23:24:56 +0000 UTCNo I don't think I we did
Augustus
2021-05-28 18:03:50 +0000 UTCRemember when randy was fighting that one spear user after he met Helen mom on tellus after she died. It was cheaper 1742. His spear form and image began to sync with horrors from the deep. It says that instead of him pulling from the horror of the deep, he became it. Did we ever get the results from that?
Michael Gordon
2021-05-28 10:42:14 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-05-28 08:20:23 +0000 UTCThere is an array that keep them close, don’t forget you can put the entire solar system between the earth and the moon, and white dwarf are smaller then the sun, so assuming that it’s mor like few millions of km
Idan tal
2021-05-28 07:44:14 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters
nethernight11
2021-05-28 05:44:57 +0000 UTC'were it directly' it -> hit
Corwin Amber
2021-05-28 05:28:43 +0000 UTCwere it directly -> were hit directly
Konrad2
2021-05-28 05:21:53 +0000 UTCThe thing about space battles like this is it makes it seem like space is small. Even with an array and them being white dwarfs there should at least be a billion of miles between them. 3.7 billion miles from the sun to pluto for example.
Chris
2021-05-28 05:12:29 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2021-05-28 03:42:15 +0000 UTC
