Chapter 1654
Added 2021-01-20 04:54:42 +0000 UTCComments
i’d assume the battleground as puddles wouldn’t kill the whole elite squad who is also on the planet
hi angus
2021-01-20 15:44:32 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2021-01-20 12:33:50 +0000 UTCRandidly’s not from Zone 7 though. Iirc it’s either Zone 32 or 33 that Donnyton is in.
BladeTytan
2021-01-20 11:27:20 +0000 UTCI really don't want him to change his physical appearance. He needs to rep humanity. Zone 7 for life. Can't have him looking like an alien or monster. Definitely needs to be human but more. Edit- not zone 7. 7th cohort. My bad.
drag0nreb0rn
2021-01-20 06:50:11 +0000 UTCThe harder substance might be wood
Alexander Dupree
2021-01-20 06:48:51 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-01-20 06:34:11 +0000 UTCWait so is it everyone that was on that whole war planet that most likely haven’t made it alive or was it just everyone in that specific battle ground that everything went to crap?
Thundermike00
2021-01-20 06:02:36 +0000 UTCThis was so good, Puddles.
ElectricintheForest
2021-01-20 05:58:42 +0000 UTC'of Elhume strike' Elhume -> Elhume's 'The was a shifting' The -> There 'ice ll filled' ll <- what word was this supposed to be?
Corwin Amber
2021-01-20 05:34:11 +0000 UTCEpic
Luke Preston
2021-01-20 05:33:15 +0000 UTCWould it not be better if you aimed for a number of words in the month instead of a number of chapters?
Ferco
2021-01-20 05:28:43 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters! That was awesome. Thursday night can’t come fast enough.
David C
2021-01-20 05:26:52 +0000 UTCBad ass. Hope he still looks like himself, just more in harmony with his images. Like permanent green hair, golden veins, the tails, and the suffocating gaze. Glad some of the damage was shunted to his worlds. Can't let them get complacent.
Qrystof
2021-01-20 05:11:44 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2021-01-20 04:55:02 +0000 UTC
