Chapter 1599
Added 2020-11-29 06:07:56 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for Raymunds bodyyy.
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-19 07:22:12 +0000 UTCNobody knows what happens to progenitors after their test, techt could qualify as something similar. But it’s already been hinted at that people who get close to the secret that Edeaine and randidly have discovered end up disappearing, those people have to be powerful. They probably don’t have limits on how much aether that they receive from the system as well.
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-11 11:39:35 +0000 UTCYOU KILLED RAYMUND YOU BASTARD!!!!!!!
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-11 11:38:37 +0000 UTCOh fuck me, i cant handle this characters death at all. Why must you do this to me!
Epeen
2021-02-25 23:33:36 +0000 UTCJust take my money!
Palton Hammerad
2020-12-05 08:31:43 +0000 UTCFUCK! ...This reminds me of Roger...may he rest in peace.
Palton Hammerad
2020-12-05 08:31:01 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2020-11-29 12:16:35 +0000 UTCI call this bullshit. What the hell is that part where he is telling that his brother is stronger than anyone else?. That is pure bullshit.
Leaored
2020-11-29 09:46:30 +0000 UTCShal vs Randidly coming soon to theatres near you.
Raiser
2020-11-29 08:39:48 +0000 UTCI somewhat agree, but it also keeps the reader on their toes when you lose someone your emotionally invested in. In this case I think its a fair trade.
Krazy Kanaka
2020-11-29 07:49:12 +0000 UTCMan I hope Raymond gets saved but shit idk what’s gonna happen on this one
Demitrius Fogle
2020-11-29 07:31:23 +0000 UTCReally like where you are going with this! Finding out the secret plot from Techet like that feels forced though. Hope to see whether or not Rand can feel the connection/borrowed weight from Raymund being severed! Maybe Rand will also see Shal after portalling in. Good luck for tomorrow
Qybalt
2020-11-29 07:24:47 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2020-11-29 07:15:01 +0000 UTCYeah even saying Commander Shal seems too on the nose. When you revise this, just show Shal's prominent features: blue skin, extra eye, SPEAR.
Christopher Sigurdson
2020-11-29 07:02:05 +0000 UTCSeems like a relatively large investment of time and energy put into this character wasted if he dies now. I thought the quest to find his brother was only just beginning.
Kevin Mendoza
2020-11-29 06:50:02 +0000 UTCHey maybe use subtext to indicate what is happening rather than that kind of explanation that the brother used. Something like a comment about the operation they’re about to start that indicates what is going on without saying it.
Alexander Dupree
2020-11-29 06:37:10 +0000 UTCOof that’s sad I liked him
Alexander Dupree
2020-11-29 06:36:37 +0000 UTCo the Fifth Cohort.- of the Fifth Cohort.
Chris
2020-11-29 06:32:33 +0000 UTCWTF
David C
2020-11-29 06:32:07 +0000 UTCWell, fuck. That's wild.
Josiah Henderson
2020-11-29 06:23:06 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2020-11-29 06:11:03 +0000 UTC
