Chapter 1558
Added 2020-10-21 05:26:28 +0000 UTCComments
For some reason people don't see progress here and yet... I find this inspiring. It is a part of your story that holds impossibility in its hand. It is the center and core of your story and all the reason I'm here for.
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-14 07:40:50 +0000 UTCDauntless would be proud
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-14 07:37:27 +0000 UTCI'm really liking where this might go.
Jbles
2020-10-22 08:27:39 +0000 UTCI hope this is sarcasm
vagae056
2020-10-22 03:29:43 +0000 UTCi agree, these past chapters feel like nothing have happened, but the funny thing is even puddle’s worst chapters still are amazing and interesting to read. this chapter had me hooked even though basically nothing happens
hi angus
2020-10-21 20:39:41 +0000 UTCDude. You make 6700 a month from writing this story. This is your job. Pump out some chapters. We expect a lot because you have set the bar so high. I understand that you may need time to figure out the path forward but 5 or less a week is not what the patrons are paying for.
drag0nreb0rn
2020-10-21 17:52:29 +0000 UTCThank you hope you have a good break You deserve it
Luke Preston
2020-10-21 08:05:17 +0000 UTCI'm getting major Evil Dead vibes from this one. I'm loving it!
roflvaliant
2020-10-21 07:25:12 +0000 UTCI'm digging it hard, it's nice to see an actual change in Randy's emotions, thought process and perspective beyond "train, train, train"
ElReaping
2020-10-21 06:46:38 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2020-10-21 06:35:32 +0000 UTCIf your critique dissuades those you give it to, you’ve failed as a critic. This is just an unneeded complaint that your expectations aren’t being met, not really helpful
Aiden
2020-10-21 06:29:57 +0000 UTCI feel that one of these should be above “But instead of those slippery grey beings below, the attack came from below.”
Aiden
2020-10-21 06:28:34 +0000 UTCHonestly a whole bunch of nothing happened here. 0 development.
Gnossos
2020-10-21 06:22:49 +0000 UTCSo again you give less results. And this time because you need to prepare for your days off. Seriously with the extra time you had you should have had a stack of extra chapters to release when you need time off. You are sitting on an average of 7 chapters a week. Compared to when you released 11 chapters, you should have a lot of free time on your hands
Amir Tal
2020-10-21 05:36:49 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2020-10-21 05:26:43 +0000 UTC
