Chapter 1510
Added 2020-09-03 04:57:42 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the eggs
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-10 04:37:55 +0000 UTC“...hadn’t yet realized the joyous experience//ed of being trained by me.”
SunderGoldmane
2021-02-12 01:34:40 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Really enjoying this arc.
Joshua Little
2020-09-05 09:50:09 +0000 UTCUgggh this arc is amazing. I need moooore. Thanks for the boot camp eggs
Christopher Sigurdson
2020-09-03 19:57:19 +0000 UTC“He was only on a small hill above the vast trench” —> should be a “standing” between only and on
David C
2020-09-03 19:25:09 +0000 UTCI'm loving this so much. Maybe some of these characters will be helpful to Randidly in the future. Maybe he'll help them. I'm hoping both. Also, Randidly was such a badass in this chapter. I'm just loving all the imagery contained in this chapter honestly. Raymund is very interesting to me. The fire elemental is my close second. I just love the idea of a pure-hearted badass fire elemental.
EnigmaticOne
2020-09-03 07:22:49 +0000 UTCGod damn is this arc scratching ALL of my itches. RG the drill instructor is perfect, Helen is amazing, Heiffal is wonderful, and the recruit's reactions are sublime.
JTP
2020-09-03 06:11:12 +0000 UTC"realized the joyous experienced of" - should be experience
Krazy Kanaka
2020-09-03 05:41:51 +0000 UTC"watched the recruits matches" - needs an apostrophe on recruits
Krazy Kanaka
2020-09-03 05:38:35 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2020-09-03 05:14:30 +0000 UTCHelen's encouragement is perfect
Alexander Dupree
2020-09-03 05:13:31 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2020-09-03 04:57:56 +0000 UTC