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Chapter 1510

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Thanks for the eggs

Will, of the convictions forge.

“...hadn’t yet realized the joyous experience//ed of being trained by me.”

SunderGoldmane

Thanks for the chapter. Really enjoying this arc.

Joshua Little

Ugggh this arc is amazing. I need moooore. Thanks for the boot camp eggs

Christopher Sigurdson

“He was only on a small hill above the vast trench” —> should be a “standing” between only and on

David C

I'm loving this so much. Maybe some of these characters will be helpful to Randidly in the future. Maybe he'll help them. I'm hoping both. Also, Randidly was such a badass in this chapter. I'm just loving all the imagery contained in this chapter honestly. Raymund is very interesting to me. The fire elemental is my close second. I just love the idea of a pure-hearted badass fire elemental.

EnigmaticOne

God damn is this arc scratching ALL of my itches. RG the drill instructor is perfect, Helen is amazing, Heiffal is wonderful, and the recruit's reactions are sublime.

JTP

"realized the joyous experienced of" - should be experience

Krazy Kanaka

"watched the recruits matches" - needs an apostrophe on recruits

Krazy Kanaka

Thanks for the chapter

nethernight11

Helen's encouragement is perfect

Alexander Dupree

Corrections

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