Chapter 1509
Added 2020-09-03 04:55:26 +0000 UTCComments
Fucking savage transformation. I can see Rand looking like a monster full of rage covered in shadow that reveals his figure like straight out of a horror movie. Its like in the movie split and the man called the beast
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-06-10 03:28:21 +0000 UTC“His skin began to darken//Ed// and char”
SunderGoldmane
2021-02-12 01:20:56 +0000 UTC“...”Toward the entrance to the main entrance of the area...” feels like there is a redundancy in this sentence?
SunderGoldmane
2021-02-12 01:20:23 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2020-09-05 09:34:01 +0000 UTCI think it works better dropping the s. "Ram horns"
InsaneHyde
2020-09-03 17:07:42 +0000 UTC"impatience to dominant his aura" - should say dominate
Krazy Kanaka
2020-09-03 06:05:19 +0000 UTC"He wondered for several if he" - needs a word to measure the time in between several and if, "several seconds" or "several long breaths" etc.
Krazy Kanaka
2020-09-03 05:58:20 +0000 UTC"gather all of the strongest individual" - should be individuals
Krazy Kanaka
2020-09-03 05:51:35 +0000 UTC'rams horns' I'm not sure, but should it be 'ram's horns' ? it currently looks wrong, but I'm just not sure if it is or not.
Corwin Amber
2020-09-03 05:11:59 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2020-09-03 05:07:21 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2020-09-03 04:55:41 +0000 UTC
