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Chapter 1398

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I really love the concept of images being weak to other images. Is like those games where water is weak to fire and fire is weak to rock.

Will, of the convictions forge.

I thought he used his Earthquake skill when he stamped his foot. I wonder what will eventually become of it.

Misery

Thanks for the eggs

nethernight11

Corrections: A pulse of energy spread out from his chest. His fingers tingled. The aura of life- ??? did something get half deleted or something here? I'm not sure if "His fingers tingled" really makes a full sentence... Even with his weakened image, as long as he had a few moments to recover- ???? if these dashes are abrupt changes in thought you need to put something after them or they look like half written sentences.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little


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