Chapter 1398
Added 2020-05-07 05:20:13 +0000 UTCComments
I really love the concept of images being weak to other images. Is like those games where water is weak to fire and fire is weak to rock.
Will, of the convictions forge.
2024-05-24 07:06:57 +0000 UTCI thought he used his Earthquake skill when he stamped his foot. I wonder what will eventually become of it.
Misery
2020-05-08 17:19:06 +0000 UTCThanks for the eggs
nethernight11
2020-05-07 06:29:41 +0000 UTCCorrections: A pulse of energy spread out from his chest. His fingers tingled. The aura of life- ??? did something get half deleted or something here? I'm not sure if "His fingers tingled" really makes a full sentence... Even with his weakened image, as long as he had a few moments to recover- ???? if these dashes are abrupt changes in thought you need to put something after them or they look like half written sentences.
Joshua Little
2020-05-07 06:16:56 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2020-05-07 06:16:32 +0000 UTC
