Black Horda Ch.21 - Ugly Emotions (part3)
Added 2022-05-07 13:22:59 +0000 UTC







phew this was a long episode, and a pain to edit. Hope you enjoyed this little deep dive into Seth's cracked psyche.
Comments
Cat the amount of xate they have absorbed correlates with how strong they are. and what ability it is
Vulcan
2022-05-10 11:02:02 +0000 UTCQuestion number 1:Does does a slayer age relate to how strong they are?
cat
2022-05-09 07:34:34 +0000 UTCYeshhh same! It makes their actions so much more believable, and it's a better way to characterize them as opposed to having other characters describe them from the outside.
Cloverloy
2022-05-08 18:13:11 +0000 UTCI love love loveeee reading characters inner minds. It’s my most favorite thing. I love knowing every detail and thought process a character goes through. It’s the biggest reason why I can’t stop reading Wuxiaworld novels. The characters pov narration pulls me in deep
Qouth
2022-05-08 04:17:56 +0000 UTCAhahah Thanks! and I am sorry for your poor phone.
Cloverloy
2022-05-07 17:24:17 +0000 UTC:^)
Cloverloy
2022-05-07 17:23:39 +0000 UTCBut nice job keep the terms consistent like when talking from seth point of it's always "it" or "The slayer" and when he imaged the crack between them ethy wasn't with lias and the others because he hasn't accepted her as part of the group. So Great Job!
Vulcan
2022-05-07 15:40:49 +0000 UTCI always love the way that cloverloy handles her character but even though there was some cool gear/flower visuals I loved the best part of this chapter WAS THE "Rejected" PART BABY NOW J NEXT Q AND Z, LET'S GO!!!!!!
Vulcan
2022-05-07 15:32:12 +0000 UTCSeth`s could ask Ethy about being immune to slayer possessions, but I doubt he would.
cat
2022-05-07 14:57:45 +0000 UTCGreat episode. Also Jesus Christ cloverloy that was long enough to make my very old phone lag
Haley Nohrden
2022-05-07 14:41:59 +0000 UTC