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Added 2018-09-12 02:46:06 +0000 UTCI've actually thought a lot about the reaction to the sudden switch for Lucretia, and that one is on me guys. My bad.
Spent today re outlining the short term arc to address the issue. I don't think the two identities are as far from each other as you'd think, but it requires more text. The goal is to revise yesterday's Lucretia parts tomorrow and release three chapters putting her on firmer ground.
I care about your reading experience, and listen when you spot issues. My goal is to make sure that things flow as smoothly as possible.
Keep up the good work in pointing out my mistakes!
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Also I am a little confused on what wights are: real people or just protoplasm controlled by bugs, is the head dude a bug too? Did you mean it to be a mystery? Thanks for taking some time with L. Is Shal a half bug?
Radar
2018-09-12 12:21:10 +0000 UTCPersonally when I started reading that lucretia bit all i could think of was "wtf is happening, did i miss a chapter? Is she still inside RGs soul? If not how and when did she leave?"
Zamir Pestano
2018-09-12 09:06:28 +0000 UTCI'm actually fascinated to see how you remedy this issue- everytime you've made changes in the past they've been impressive. Personally, I was surprised by the Lucretia change, but it made sense in some ways. But I think some more detail will be really good.
ElectricintheForest
2018-09-12 07:31:54 +0000 UTCSo who in this story is not crazy?
Håvard
2018-09-12 07:04:29 +0000 UTCSame, Helen is good but she is also crazy.
Joshua Little
2018-09-12 06:08:06 +0000 UTCI'm still rooting for Azriel and Rand, so there's going to be a riot regardless.
Matemeo
2018-09-12 03:34:40 +0000 UTCIf Rand and Helen don't end up together i might riot -dood-
Prinny Knight
2018-09-12 03:32:33 +0000 UTCthank you :D
pukeofhurl
2018-09-12 03:04:15 +0000 UTC
