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Chapter 399

 

Mrs. Hamilton’s gaze was locked on Randidly’s still form. With all this, would Randidly still seek to defend humanity...? Would he have the heart to resist throwing himself to his quest to resist the influence of the System...?

Mrs. Hamilton didn't think he wanted to rid the world of the System completely, but it was clear from his unwillingness to adopt a Class that it didn't sit well with him. It was more than just a youthful rejection of authority, too. There was... a knowledge there, Mrs. Hamilton could sense. There was a deep worry. What was it about the System that infuriated him so...?

The light began to build, and this time, it wasn't just light, but a scorching heat. Doing her best to suppress a gasp, Mrs. Hamilton stood and stumbled backwards, away from the source of the heat. Even so, her skin was red and dry, even as she felt her own improved Vitality move to cope with the damage. Her frown deepened as the light departed, leaving a rune that now appeared to burn visibly, not with actual flames, but with heat waves around the sigil. It inexorably floated upwards, sinking into the skin, morphing it, making part of its aura a sense of dry devastation.

Displaying a surprising amount of insight, Lyra patted Mrs. Hamilton shoulder. With a complete dearth of tact, she then said, "I think it's one of those times where the more they go against us, the more they emphasize us. Don't give up on our path so easily."

Mrs. Hamilton wondered if she possessed the ability to kill this foolish girl. Her Soul Poison Skill that she obtained at level 30 might be worth a shot, regardless of the fact that she was almost completely composed of the System's laws. At least then, one of the last elements that were within her purview that completely ignored her control would be gone.

Well, perhaps that was part of the fun, Mrs. Hamilton reflected. Without Lyra... it was like everything she was doing was too predictable. Lyra and Randidly. They shared that habit of acting in a way that left her almost infuriated, but mostly amused.

Mrs. Hamilton patted her shoulder back. For all she wanted to murder the girl, she did have a certain annoying physical beauty. And people like pretty things.

"If that's everyone..." Octavius seemed still to be worried, and glanced around. No one else stepped forward out of the darkness, no more forces acted. "Then..."

He produced a hammer, and then a small table, and swung it down, as a judge would hit with a gavel.

Mrs. Hamilton blinked. Because right before the hammer hit the table, the hammer stopped.

"Not so fast." 

Lyra spoke, but it wasn't Lyra's voice. It was something older, something darker, something much more dangerous. So this... was the Creature.

"A pleasure," Mrs. Hamilton found herself saying. "You are... the one they call the Creature? May I inquire after your name?"

"Yestyx. How quaint." When Mrs. Hamilton, the Creature and was looking at her, smiling something like a cancerous organ would grin at you. "No one has asked me that in a very long time. For that, I'll give you a gift."

Lyra's hand reached out and touched Mrs. Hamilton, and as she struggled to back away from the younger woman, she found herself frozen. When those fingers touched her, Mrs. Hamilton thought she would freeze to death, as something colossal and lonely brushed its soul up against her.

Then she pulled her hand away, and Mrs. Hamilton fell back gasping. The feeling quickly departed, and she was left wondering if anything at all had happened.

"I'll also let you see this. Although you should know, telling that poor boy that I do this will only confuse him. Better leave me as the easy enemy. It will make... the next part simpler."

Lyra's body walked forward, filled with Yestyx, the Creature, until she could reach out and touch Randidly. Which she did, stroking his cheek.

"My hero..." Yestyx whispered, her smile wicked. "I'm trapped in this dungeon. Come save me from the dragon~. I name you... Poison for the Fickle Aether."

Something in reality cracked, and Mrs. Hamilton felt herself sliced in half, and then die.

Then something corrected itself, and she was back whole. She vomited, spilling the stew she had eaten for dinner over the grey ivory ground, not caring at all how graceful she seemed. Yestyx laughed.

The rune was not a rune, but it was an absence of anything, shaped as a rune. It was several slashes in the fabric of the world, quivering and dark. And for this, light did not come, but simply a deep, blanketing darkness. As the darkness grew and grew, it muffled light, then noise, then thought.

Then it was gone, and Mrs. Hamilton was shaken by the fact she had no idea how long that had taken.

What was left was a small, wizened rune, barely the size of a fingernail, but it burned with pure hatred. It squirmed and seemed to emit a keening wail, full of absolute disgust. It was an emotion that would not negotiate, would not show mercy, would not compromise.

It sunk into the Class without a trace.

The hammer banged on the table. Then Octavius spoke, still with his eyes on the ashy remains of the treant, not even noticing Lyra's abrupt appearance next to Randidly's side. "Then that ends this Transcendence. Perhaps the most effective one I've ever seen... but then I've only seen four. Now, since this is such an extreme situation... I suppose I will need to submit a report."

When Lyra opened her mouth, Mrs. Hamilton's hand, shaking though it was, clamped down on her shoulder. This was her turf, not this hasty girl's.

"Ah, transcendence is against the System's rules?" Mrs. Hamilton asked innocently.

At the mention of rules, Octavius' ears visibly perked up. "Hmm Hmm, a very interest question. What was your name again? I would say that it isn't against the System's rules, because at its core, the System forbids nothing. Anyone may take the path of the Heretic, for example. Only, there are consequences for all actions that subvert the will of the System-"

"How intriguing and well designed. Individuals such as yourself undoubtedly are a necessary part, keeping the System running."

"Haha! Well..." The rhino man seemed to blush, and gave her a look that Mrs. Hamilton had received many times from human men. She almost wanted to roll her eyes. It was the look a man gave her when they moved her from an unknown entity, to something that wasn't attractive enough to be lusted after, but wasn't yet old enough to have her brain dissolve into mush. A capable assexual being. Easy to work with, uncomplicated, and she could feel him shift her.

The grey spider in her mind rubbed his forelegs together in glee.

"Perhaps so, administration of the System is not something that is simple... it's more of a monitoring. Seeking patterns. Finding problems and making sure the System recognizes them as an issue."

"Ah, so you've known this was coming for a long time?" Mrs. Hamilton asked quizzically. Lyra was silent in very strange way, her gaze focused on Mrs. Hamilton's face.

So she can imitate me later, practicing in the mirror, Mrs. Hamilton thought with a certain bitterness. And Mrs. Hamilton had no doubt that she would be great at it.

"Of course! Your... Earth, has been peculiar in a number of ways," Octavius said, coughing into his hand, then pounding his chest. "The exploits of your people have surpassed expectations by magnitudes. My regular reports detail the dangers of humans in an incredible amount of accuracy! I had just this sort of situation in mind-"

Gotcha, Mrs. Hamilton thought, her mouth staying perfectly still. "So... this Transcendence... it necessitates an... emergency report?"

"Well no," Octavius said with a sigh, shaking his head. "There is only one time that a true direct report is given: when the first world in the Cohort triggers the Calamity, I will give a debriefing on everything. Until then, the regular reports are how I record my research..."

He trailed off, seemingly struggling with something. Which made Mrs. Hamilton narrow her eyes. Was he truly...

But then he spoke, and she once more felt at ease. "I suppose... this doesn't constitute something that is outside the normal operations of the System... Still... I'm somewhat worried..."

There was a greedy gleam in Octavius eye. Mrs. Hamilton smiled. Making a deal with a fool was unpredictable. Making a deal with a monstrous intelligent rhinoceros that had weaseled himself into controlling a whole Cohort of the System...

"Tell me what you are worried about," Mrs. Hamilton cooed. Lyra watched, her eyes unblinking. 

The ash treant did cartwheels, delighting in his body.

****

"You feel that?" Donny looked towards the horizon. Lucifer stood next to him, gazing in the same direction as him, towards the Northeast.

"Yea..." The other man didn't speak much, Donny had learned very quickly, but was most comfortable brooding, and meticulously inspecting his equipment. Donny was disappointed that all of that careful maintenance hadn't had anything to do with the cloak he allegedly received from slaying the first Tier III Raid Boss, but it was something that Donny could afford to wait on.

If the difficulty of the Raid Dungeon was to be believed, they would need every tool in their arsenal to handle it. At least based on the seriousness that the Ghosthound was treating it...

"He.... finally got a Class..." Lucifer said, squinting towards the swirling clouds, visible even miles away.

"Yea..." Donny said, not knowing what else to say. That was their leader. The hope of humanity.

The Ghosthound.

Donny wondered what sort of Class he ended up with. He wondered what sort of level up gains he would receive from it.

Comments

I believe the creature didn't want RG to know because she was actually helping RG and if he thinks of her as helping and hurting then he wouldn't be near as easy to manipulate. Her role in his story is acting as his foil and that only works if he does not realize that is her role.

Alan McBrayer

Yeah, Mt secondary reading of the chapters proved that to me. Less upset about the additions as it was made clear it was still his Class.

Tibstrike

First of all, great chapters P thank you. I think the Creature foreshadowed that RG would know who was doing these manipulations and that he might interpret the creatures actions as another reason to defeat the dungeon/it. Therefore, one would assume that RG will also understand who created these other class elements. Finally, it seems that the creature cut out or copied Mrs. Hamilton‘s skill of being able to kill another person by poisoning their soul and gave it to RG to Counter Mrs. Hamilton/Lyra herself as the Creature’s class contribution. Accordingly I don’t see any of this as a negative but very much a positive. In fact, it looks like the creature is truly on RG’s side. A lot of fun Puddles - well done!

Radar

AHHHH FUCK, JUST LET ME SEE WHAT HAPPENS OMG

Carter

I wonder what the implications are that the Creature's rune was built out of nether, not aether?

Choboman

I feel as though he created the general scheme, and then people came in to fill it with additional detail. That's not saying that each detail is wanted or 100% agreeable by RG, but hopefully he has a clue as to who tampered with his class creation.

Matemeo

He'll probably break that button. And gain Button Mashing Lv. 1

ThePolarParadox

From what it sounds like is that they didn’t change what RG wanted out of his class. They were adding to it. He only used a small portion of the gathered Aether to make what he wanted and they used the rest to Add things not change what he wanted. Big difference.

Chawki89

Please please please Randidly, prove to them all that you will not be controlled by ANYONE. System or otherwise

Danielle Warvel

Realization:

Kevin Ramos

I want him to hit the reject button when the class they added onto comes up, and then just remaking his original idea. lol

Meschmee

100% agree, frankly it feels like you took the RG we now and love and essentially turned him into a puppet, always doing everything at the whim of others. As such depending on how the next few chapters go, randidly loses alot of his appeal as a mc to me, As you've said hes the inciting action, now its more along the lines of hes the puppet everyone wants to pull the strings on, Age of ultron and no strings on me? What would be very interesting to see is frankly that rg was concious during this portion, and he can conciously choose to accept, reject, or change these addons to the class he designed.

Tooshar

Oh, why didn’t Neveah get to add something?

Chris Vogt II

Holy crap...there was so much packed into those 4 chapters. You could spend another 50 chapters just unpacking and explaining it all before we even get to the Raid Dungeon. Very cool stuff, Puddles, thanks for sharing!

Chris Vogt II

Is it really any different from how he came to be? Randidly was already influenced by the people he met. Thats the same for any human being. The question is, to what extent will Randidly allow their hopes and desires to influence him?

ThePolarParadox

As interesting as it may be for RG to learn how to integrate all the images that these entities (since like half of them aren't really people) into his idea of what his class will be, I will say one thing. So many people having such sway in something that is meant to be unique to RG does kinda rub the wrong way. You made a point to have him think of all the things that influence him, which was cool, but so many people having direct access to the makeup of his class, and being able to warp it to their whims, makes it seem like RG is being taken advantage of. ESPECIALLY since the only one who seems to be doing this simply to bestow some extra power is Aemont. Everyone else has some agenda that they need to use RG to achieve, which feels pretty bad as a reader invested in RG maintaining his autonomy.

BigBuckler

well, see, the creature is actually pretty good at screwing the system. it makes sense that it can affect both the overseer and lyra because they're system constructs. lyra isn't really a love interest, he rejected her for age when the system was literally trying to smoosh them together. also, he had other stuff to do for most of lyra's imprisonment. Randidly being "poison for fickle aether" could fit him in lots of ways. for one, he just got a move to infuse nether into attacks, which ignores defences levied by aether. he also has been known to break or burn away system bonds using his much purer aether. finally, it could be said that the muddy aether of the system is fickle in that any master can force it to turn against a person of the same source. randidly himself could be considered a "poison" against those who rely on that fickle aether, i.e. their master status, like the Endless Heats style head.

MagicWafflez

Randidly said he would be like a sapling in a vast forest. I imagine the thought that would come to my mind would be, "That is one fucked up plant." Puddles, will Randidly gain bonus attractiveness to insects, other plants, dryads and treants? Also, I bet Randidly can joke about 'morning wood' now. Ehehe. *cough *cough

ThePolarParadox

So is he going to have a bunch of subclasses or something?

Kurt A

Well done puddles. I have the feeling that you thought up a bunch of awesome class names and couldn't decide on just one so you went with this route. And I am amazed that all of those names are better than anything I can come up with. Keep up the amazing work!

400 chapters and our boy is finally getting a class!

Thransk

Why do you have to have Randidly be totally vulnerable to these machinations of the Creature? He's stronger than ever, he's come such a long way, and every time the Creature shows up even slightly he gets fucked over for 100 chapters or so. She still has total control of the love interest, preventing Randidly from interacting with Lyra for over half the novel. Idk how the ethos of "poison for fickle Aether"(Randidly's Aether is very fickle) fits at all with his image, or how nobody notices how she stole a big chunk of his aether to make that fuse into his class, or how nobody tells the administrator "hey, all the regalia for the whole zone is stolen by a system transgressor" or how any of the super powerful people we just met who care about Randidly do NOTHING to help him against any of the bullshit that happens. Very Frustrating.


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