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Chapter 320

 

Doing his best to put his Path woes out of his mind, Randidly turned his attention towards his immediate goals. Dealing with the Creature was at the top, but Randidly still wasn’t confident in his ability to do that yet. Although it felt a little bit like procrastinating, Randidly was unwilling to move forward without first understanding Aether a little bit more completely.

The strength that thing had displayed on their last encounter… it made Randidly grit his teeth. He was not at that level yet.

Below that was investigating in the whereabouts of Sydney and Ace. This was difficult because, based on what Randidly knew from his dreams, she was near the Skeleton Knight. IF those dreams could even be trusted.

Ace was apparently in contact with her, although there was some conflict there, so he was likely near there. 

Randidly turned and surveyed the area. Previous classes of pledgees had come back to the area around the Wild Rider, from whatever anthill they had been hiding in. There were about 70 of them, and based on their movements, they were quite well trained and focused. As Randidly watched, the Wild Rider held a quiet discussion with Jemma while a contingent of these riders flanked her, glaring at anyone who would come near their leader.

There was a blind devotion in their eyes that made Randidly slightly uncomfortable. Well, perhaps uncomfortable was the wrong word. He didn’t like them, and planned on having as little interaction with them as possible.

Of course, just as Randidly thought that, the Wild Rider began walking over towards Randidly, dragging Jemma along with her. Randidly groaned inwardly, and did his best to keep his face neutral.

Apparently his acting was extremely poor, because as soon as she arrived, the Wild Rider said, “Am I really that bad of a conversationalist? You look like you are preparing to eat your bonded animals dung.”

As Randidly opened his mouth, he paused, because every one of the riders that followed, and ostensibly guarded the Wild Rider, was giving him a glare thick with jealousy and animosity. Were they offended because the Wild Rider came over to joke with him, or because he didn’t consider it an honor to eat his animal’s dung…?

This was exactly why he didn’t want to interact with extremist groups. Randidly supposed that the Wild Rider’s extreme independence was similar, but that also made it so she cared very little whether people followed her. Probably, she would prefer if they didn’t. As such, it fell to her little peons to become over involved in the affairs of the world…

Randidly just shrugged helplessly, half meaning it as an apology.

The Wild Rider laughed, which sounded like chirping insects. “Well anyway, I would like to discuss your future plans David. And of course, you too…?”

The Wild Rider gave Randidly a questioning look. “Neveah,” He supplied.

“David and Neveah,” The Wild Rider said, nodding. Randidly could tell that underneath her Regalia, the girl was giving the Bone Wurm a wide smile, as if it was the cutest thing in the world, and not a huge construct of bone and rot.

What Randidly didn't’ expect was Neveah’s reaction, as she flailed somewhat, and rolled her body towards them with a upthrust of rock. “Why David? Name’s not David.”

There was an awkward silence. Randidly winced, rubbing his neck. It took a few seconds for the people around to understand Neveah’s raspy, echoing voice, combined with her broken english, but very quickly they seemed to reach the correct conclusion all at the same time.

Of them all, the guards seemed to take this the most seriously, as if a fake name was a discovery that could threaten the Wild Rider. As if now that his fake name had been revealed, Randidly could turn against them, striking now that his cover had been blown.

Jesus, how touchy can you guys get…?

Jemma just seemed confused, and the Wild Rider tilted her head to the side. “Your… name isn’t David? But you told Simon-”

“Not David, Ghosthound.” Neveah supplied happily, righting herself and trying her best to rub, in a way that Randidly had to assume was affectionately, against his side. She basically just tore a hole in his pants with a protrusion of bone. Randidly sighed.

Unlike the previous time, THIS time the reaction was immediate.

There was no one in Zone 33 that didn’t know the name Ghosthound.

The guards drew their weapons and leveled them towards Randidly. Jemma began to tremble, looking at him with wide eyes. Her metallic dog squeezed through the press of bodies and rubbed reassuringly against her side.

One of the taller guards, riding a moose and holding a glaive, said to Randidly. “You… are the Ghosthound? Of Donnyton? What’s your angle, coming here?”

His voice was cold, and from his eyes he had a confidence in his ability to fight. Randidly just shook his head inwardly. Jesus, if he had known founding that village would make him famous someday, he would have thought long and hard about whether to do it. And likely refused to do it. This was getting annoying.

As if she couldn’t sense the palpable animosity around her, the Wild Rider walked forward and patted Randidly’s arm. Randidly looked at the horns next to his face curiously. Although the girl was only tall enough to reach his shoulder, her regalia stretched higher, level with his eyes. It truly was a beautiful headpiece. He wondered what effects it possessed.

“Ah, of course, I should have known. You are Randidly Ghosthound, the man who has made this Zone much more advanced. The Skeleton Knight and I were very surprised, that we were called down so early. We were actually second, but the first Zone on this World was of course Zone 1. The Zones are numbered based on size, so statistically, the area that Zone 1 possesses is about 100 times as large as yours. Statistically, you could not compete. To beat Zones 2-32 is something to be proud of.”

Randidly filed this information away for now, but didn’t say anything. It would perhaps be worrisome going forward, trying to compete against a larger Zone once all of the Zones opened up, but for now, it wasn’t an issue.

Instead, his mind latched onto the fact that based on what the Wild Rider said, she and the Skeleton Knight had peaceable time together before they came down to this world. Perhaps they understood their role as part of a larger System, and accepted it to a degree.

Realizing that the Wild Rider was waiting for a response, Randidly opened his mouth and said. “...thank you. As for what I’m doing… I think for now, I want to….”

Randidly trailed off. But then he seized onto an intermediate goal that he would enjoy, and would be an understandable thing for the people around him. “I want to improve my equipment. I have some ways on my own, but I’d like someplace to buy raw materials, or even finished products. It doesn’t look like you have anything here, but…”

Randidly trailed off, as the glares from the guards grew more pronounced. Randidly didn't’ know whether to be angry or roll his eyes. Although it probably would be annoying, Randidly was 100% confident that he could defeat them all, all at the same time. He had improved by leaps and bounds since he had lost to the squads of Donnyton, and although these guys probably trained well enough, they were not at that level.

Well, Randidly reflected, perhaps his frame of reference had just changed by too much. They might be the equal of Donnyton’s squad from… 6 months ago? Time was also hard to keep track of…

“...You probably want to go to the Refuge,” A woman rider said, who seemed slightly more friendly than her peers. “The armor they have there isn’t so good as what comes out of Donnyton-”

She stumbled, her eyes flicking to Randidly. He didn’t respond. Obviously, going there would get him the best options, but the Creature was still there, and Randidly wasn’t willing to draw her attention.

Perhaps, the most annoying part of this conversation was that Neveah had revealed his name. If word got back and she started looking for him.

After a hesitation as she scanned his face, the woman continued. “-But it’s good enough, and the best place in the North to get it. Just… know that they will test you.”

“Yes…” Jemma whispered, her arms wrapping around her shoulders. “Dauntless… is a monster…”

Comments

Mostly, it seemed you were sad about roger dying... personally i think helen is gonna have a child when randidly comes back next year~

MagicWafflez

Usually it seems puddles will address in the next chapter things that we wonder about in the comments... as such, i think it is jemma's job to invite everyone to the party

MagicWafflez

Well Jemma's goal in pledging to the wild rider was to be a caretaker of the animals instead of a warrior. So some discussion of the discussion is probably about what all Jemma can do with the rider. It is also possible, given the height of the rider, that they are nearly the same age/maturity level so they could be making friends.

Alan McBrayer

No worries! Good luck with everything. Royalroad is pretty far behind now, But I'll be catching them up some of the way as a christmas gift. And you can always read it for free there!

PuDDleS4263

I'm with Wafflez on this one. R has never once prioritized conversation over anything else. He'll learn plenty about Neveah as they travel.

ElectricintheForest

All she said was, “check out the package on that Bone Wurm .” They don’t call her the Wild Rider for nothing! Yehawww Giddyup!

Radar

Lol ‘tis ok I think I started the drinking that day...was truly disappointed with the Shal world wrap.

Radar

Huuuu~ i really want to know what happens to the people that pledge to the losing champion... also what the rider asked of jemma

MagicWafflez

Totally love your work Puddles, sadly finances are tight right now for me. So I'm going to have to pull my pledge for this next month. Hopefully things get worked out and I can bring it back soon. Thanks for the awesome stories.

Radar I'm sorry I yelled at you when I was drunk. Puddles is posting the draft of these chapters. If we simply ignore any and all problems with the grammar and spelling then the story as a whole will suffer and the proofreaders will burn out much quicker.

Alan McBrayer

I think you are writing beautifully

Radar

lol I knew you would rebut ;P OK, makes perfect sense he wouldn't talk to his companion at all....I am a convert.

Radar

... eloquent when? He spoke like 3 times in this whole chapter, and only because they are specifically staring at him waiting for him to talk; ergo a shrug won't be accepted. He explained his reasoning to the animals, but I think he only said like 1 sentence to the girl the whole time. If he has to talk, he will, but randidly has never really wanted to talk to people.

MagicWafflez

Grammar: The double use of statistically seems odd. Might be better to do "so base on population" in place of the first usage.

Alan McBrayer

I understand Wafflez, but Never is now talking...wouldn't you try to have a convo with it? Like, you wanna tag along I am going make some armor now, or how ya feeling, or do you know what happened to the raid boss, are ya hungry, etc. etc. I mean we can make up tons of hypotheticals like you wouldn't want to talk in front of people, etc. It just seems like Pud was hammering these out without his usual polish like Alan notes below...and sick or not I am calling him on it cause he has mad skillz and not using them is a crime. As far as Randidly, he fluctuates from not talking all to being incredibly eloquent...there really isn't and consistency other than how much Pud is putting into this particular section.

Radar

I think you're reading too much into puddles' mood... this stuff kind of needs to happen... also, his companion is currently trying to remember how to move much less display its skills. Randidly is not touchy feely at all, he and shal have sat next to eachother for 2+ friggin years and he didn't try especially hard to get to get to know him. Hell, he still doesn't know the name of that world! This is completely in his character, especially since his companion ripped his pants by cuddling not 2 minutes before. Anyway, what he states as his goal to these glaring ppl and what he is actually planning to do are not necessarily equivalent. He just needs more sturdy clothes while he's at it xD

MagicWafflez

That was a fun little reveal I'm a little disappointed we didn't get Simon's or Thea's reaction. Interesting that zone one got to this phase first though, donnyton was the first on the world to get a newbie village and a trainee village. They must have found/defeated the Tier 3 raid boss much quicker. Or the speed the champions decent is dependent on the population.

Alan McBrayer

That was a fun little reveal I'm a little disappointed we didn't get Simon's or Thea's reaction. Interesting that zone one got to this phase first though, donnyton was the first on the world to get a newbie village and a trainee village. They must have found/defeated the Tier 3 raid boss much quicker.

Alan McBrayer

First of all, thank you for writing Pud and being diligent about it - justifies our belief in you. So, R's priority isn't seeing what his companion could do or needs in terms of capability, help or getting to know her....R turns into a bumbling idiot around the little wild rider girl... Ace and Sydney have pretty much sucked hind tit for awhile now ,so what the hell, screw them they can wait...R has threatened to make equipment since before the trials on Shal's world and had access to great materials- will he really get to it now??? LOL...sequencing seems illogical...consequently, Alan must love it. ;P Pud, you are not feeling well...these chapters are probably necessary "As Is" for speed, but blah! Rest up, get laid Friday, then get back to shitting excellence...we can wait until you finish wiping.

Radar

Neveah is so cute.

Tibstrike

I always love it when characters who are hiding their strength get revealed. It's very satisfying. Thanks for the chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Cole Mathews


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