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Plant Food 195

We greatly changed the next couple of pages this week, along with the last panel of 194.  Basically the last panel of 194 was moved a couple pages into the future, which means the Saundra section just got longer~

It's also why 195 is currently a flat color WIP. It'll be full color in a couple days. You can see some super roughs of the next several pages in the WIP discord channel if you're interested!

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Comments

It has felt a bit slow. Maybe just conveying more in fewer frames?

Xul

Then the scene after this one will indeed be more interesting~

GrimFC

I think it is a combination? The digestion thing isn't my fav, but it also seemed a bit boring because they were basically laying there for multiple pages with first one then the other slowly getting covered. It wasn't even in the real world, so there was no sense of struggle or possibility of escape. So it's a forgone conclusion, plus they aren't even reacting really.

Vysirez

I dunno about reflection but it is true that without knowing why I can't well tweak anything in the future. Granted, if it's just not being fond of digestion and/or latex stuff not much I can do there. If it's overly similar positions the next few pages should improve things in that regard. If it's because she's more or less not even trying to overcome the plant well, next few pages should still improve things a bit but if not the scene after this one should be more interesting at least~

GrimFC

It's important to reflect on why so we can pin point the problem to avoid in future.

Xul

To be honest, I've found this whole digestion arc a bit uninteresting, so the fact it's getting stretched out even more is a bit disappointing. But there are going to be parts that don't appeal to everyone, so I'll survive.

Vysirez


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