Page 72 - A bubbly tale
Added 2017-07-13 01:44:49 +0000 UTCSo, attached are two versions of 72 - one with noises and thoughts, one with just noises. The original is also attached.
I'm not really pleased with how the thought one turned out, but the more complicated ideas I had risked causing confusion later on. Well, tell me what you think - I personally wanted to show Amber feels guilty about the situation but I think it detracts too much from what is going on. :/
I apologize, I think I jumped the gun on the poll this time.
Comments
Personaly I'm lean towards the orginal.
Triskey
2017-07-13 18:57:26 +0000 UTCLooking at it now, I'm going to stick with my original thoughts of just the sounds alone. While I was in favour of thought bubbles if absolutely needed for story, they do seem a little too much when combined with sounds.
Shayde Nightwolf
2017-07-13 13:47:20 +0000 UTCWell... from the three, I probably like the left one the most (Plant food 72.jpg). The _Thoughts could use a thought bubble as the normal one looks a bit confusing at the moment, and the _Orig is slightly 'unrealistic' as with her mouth covered like that, I'm not sure she would be able to talk that clearly.
MBirdCZ
2017-07-13 07:26:01 +0000 UTCi still like the original, Stop trying ot second guess yourself Sono, it really drives me nuts sometimes lol
Wingblade
2017-07-13 06:21:02 +0000 UTCthe one with just only noises look like the best, i think.
2017-07-13 04:55:53 +0000 UTCI'd almost say just keep the original. To me the gurgling seems not enough, and the bubbles seem too much. She's about to topple over the edge for the last time, and considering she was able to rest a little I can see her being able to work out one last effort along the lines of three words
Tokamara
2017-07-13 04:21:47 +0000 UTCstill like the original the best, gurgling sounds also works, don't like the thought bubble, but I guess we have options. A choose your own 1 frame of Amber comic!
Perniciousducks
2017-07-13 03:59:53 +0000 UTCLook alright. Maybe do a thought bubble like the comics do it?
Shaun Kelly
2017-07-13 02:44:48 +0000 UTCI think the thought one makes more sense given the situation
maninblack
2017-07-13 02:30:56 +0000 UTC
