Plant Food 71 Version 2
Added 2017-07-07 21:53:02 +0000 UTCWe changed the last 3 panels (added the sfx). Thoughts? 71 will be going public later tonight.
Comments
Honestly I think we can get what's happening without such sfx, it's a bit intrusive and unnecessary imo.
Stark
2017-07-08 12:41:34 +0000 UTCIt's good
maninblack
2017-07-07 23:42:46 +0000 UTCI would say go without this time, it would put more emphasis on the tightening for 72 that way.
Tokamara
2017-07-07 23:03:35 +0000 UTCI like that more. It seems like the plant has been chatting with amber and now its getting back to squeezing. It looked lie it loosened up a bit between dialog shocks, so "squeeze" first, then "tighter", assuming she's getting squeezed even more on 72
Perniciousducks
2017-07-07 22:37:06 +0000 UTCHrm.,. we use tighten on the next page. Maybe we should do without the sfx entirely?
GrimFC
2017-07-07 22:28:40 +0000 UTCI'm not sure I like the word "tighter". I know you've done "squeeze" a few times, but it seems better to me?
Perniciousducks
2017-07-07 22:16:40 +0000 UTCSo I take it it's supposed to be squeezing her tighter and it feels so good she wants it even tighter?
Shaun Kelly
2017-07-07 21:55:40 +0000 UTC
