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I like it so far. I wouldn't be a patron if I didn't!

J S

Going well for now but I am hoping for more group dynamics and how our MC does with new people and a new group. Maybe getting him a mentor that is actually kind? More description of Soulkin interactions especially cute ones of Aureus and Coco playing? Maybe an explanation why more Unblessed aren't made Blessed if there is a need for an army? And why everyone isn't Blessed since there really doesn't seem to be much need for the Unblessed economically or socially? I mean come on make their economy beast based and making more blessed is like creating Customers and soldiers at the same time. Some more explanation of what makes a Ruler? Also can you make a Primer explaining Cultivation?

Crazyone47


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