Chapter 6's revision/rewrite is up
Added 2025-04-27 16:24:41 +0000 UTCThis was was also a bit of an extensive rewrite. I noticed a lot of inconsistencies that end up not making sense in later chapters. Those are being fixed.
This story is definitely getting another round of extensive revision before I can call it serviceable, but it'll get there. Once again, the document is in the Story-Updates channel on Discord.
