Chapter 12: Comfort and Calm
Added 2025-02-02 17:03:52 +0000 UTCThe password is still the same. If you need it, it is in the story-updates in my Discord. If you do not have discord and you don't have the password, send me a DM here.
Comments
So many of these go crazy places then end nice and cozy. This has been so fun to read along with.
Lurkybot3k
2025-02-02 21:15:34 +0000 UTCIt will be, but I don't want to overwhelm the reader with that much of an info dump in one chapter.
A D G
2025-02-02 20:43:54 +0000 UTCThere was a lot of backstory shared here. I enjoyed it, but i also felt that a lot of the things that Jake was explaining about his situation felt a bit "abridged" and might need a bit more explaining for the reader's sake.
Hesrah
2025-02-02 20:18:23 +0000 UTCI am remined of the movie "Fortress" 1992. When the main character was dreaming of having sex with wife he was woken up by the computer warning of a "Inappropriate Thought Crime". But yes - it does sound like Earth has gone to Shit.. And I still wonder why Max's people still want it.
Marcwolf
2025-02-02 19:21:52 +0000 UTCWell worth the wait, although I thought they would be doing more interesting exploration. So that is Jakes story. I am really interested to hear Max's story - although he keeps dodging the subject. It is going to be difficult without an AI saying "Dishonesty Detected" or "Sexual Arousal Detected".
Marcwolf
2025-02-02 19:17:06 +0000 UTC
