Emperor's Shadow, Chapter 9
Added 2021-10-15 19:41:04 +0000 UTCIn which they explore the bottom of the temple. Someone gets angry, and another adds something they've never done to their skillset before!
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I see Lyndis has an eye for adventure. *ba da ding* lol the chapter flows well though the queen part threw me off. She's a vampire yet she said her SISTER is the emerald lady, so does that mean shes a dragon? And if she is the part that threw me off was how nonreactive Lyndis and the Kobold were to hearing this news. I think that part might need a few adjustments along with a few typos in the chapter.
Cryodrake
2021-10-27 19:15:10 +0000 UTCYes, this was a character named after Rev. It's not...the same rev? The story he's from gets wibbly wobbly.
Justin lee
2021-10-22 22:04:57 +0000 UTCPoor rev, first asturbury now whatever this is.
The Dread Sky
2021-10-22 20:08:11 +0000 UTC
