Sah Shattered God: Chapter 41
Added 2021-04-30 21:42:31 +0000 UTCYou know the drill, give me the feedbacks, tell me what you think. Anything confusing, let me know!
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Aaaa, that one room is just a big nope for me, I hate what's in there. X3 but besides a few minor spelling errors the only part I would suggest changing is the line referring to more intruders at the end as it feels kind of obvious and out of place a little.
Cryodrake
2021-05-02 17:31:30 +0000 UTC
