Confrontation
Added 2025-12-30 06:00:07 +0000 UTCHello Friends
Two versions of the same idea,I love the tight cinematic frame of the top one, but both are valid.
When you are struggling, things can go from bad to worse very quickly . What choice does she have?
I tried to give this a real life soap opera feel
Hope you like it
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Andy
Comments
Ni doubt Lee XX
Andy Latex
2026-01-03 19:54:15 +0000 UTCYou read it very well Justine. That is exactly who Mrs Roberts is XX
Andy Latex
2026-01-03 19:52:30 +0000 UTCThank you AidanXXX
Andy Latex
2026-01-03 19:51:39 +0000 UTCwonderfully written, great ideas XXX
Andy Latex
2026-01-03 19:50:59 +0000 UTCThe two have been scheming since last October. Ever since she saw the magazine under her son's I guess now she supposed daughter's bed and she asked Ms Roberts help because she knew of her past, very personally. For the past 4 years since being widowed, Miss Roberts has been there for both of them. But mostly for her, the two had been going to the B&K spa and hotel once a month and when her "son" stayed over at a friend's house she did the same at Ms. Robert's place. She would even personally hand over the rent check which would sometimes accidentally say in her purse which means she would have to return twice in one week on the first week of the month. Despite being a mom she couldn't get her child to admit what was going on probably due to embarrassment or fear so instead they had to plan to make it seem like she was short on the rent and MS. Robert's being a fearsome landlord wanted something and compensation even though they both knew that in the end it was to help bring the daughter that they would both want in their lives and in the end with all things considered they would eventually tell the naive girl about their new relationship.
Ericka
2026-01-03 02:19:19 +0000 UTCBoth are perfect. First we get a lovely full look at Ms Roberts coat. Second a priceless close up of him in shock.
Aidan
2025-12-30 09:22:13 +0000 UTCMrs Roberts has a hard edge to her, clearly a woman who gets what, and who, she wants. Her new maid will not find life easy in her service. Would love to see how this story progresses
Justine
2025-12-30 08:29:30 +0000 UTCGlorious. And I agree: the close-up is more dramatic and cinematic (even if it means we miss Ms Roberts' lovely mac and boots 🥲)
Skinnie S
2025-12-30 08:01:43 +0000 UTCAlice stopped stroking Sheree's breasts and spoke. Poor Sheree still needed convincing. "Look Sheree, I don't think there's another way to convince him. We both know what he needs. We both know he'd make a great B&K Boy. It's just finding the right tipping point." "But isn't it blackmail? Or coercion?" "No. We're not asking him for money. We're just asking him for his time. And to satisfy his inclination. You found the magazines in his bedroom." "Yes, but still....." "Call it persuasion. You know we both want this. You want a daughter. I'd like a B&K Boy. Both of us get what we want, and Fraser gets what he wants." "It's just he's still at school." "He's eighteen, isn't he? He's about to finish. If B&K like him, I'm sure they'd give him a job. He might not have the looks at the moment, but a good makeover and a better hairstyle and he could soon fit in" "I guess you're right. Give me a kiss then I must go and do the school pick-up. Drop by a bit before five when we get home. Best that you're waiting on the drive as the demanding landlord." ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- LATER "Mum, do I have to?" "I'm really sorry Fraser, but yes. We're so far behind on the rent. I owe a lot to Alice, I mean Ms Roberts." "But, I can get a job. At least a Saturday job." "Thank you, but it won't be enough. I'm working all the hours I can at the moment but it'd take months and that's only if we tighten our belts some more." "Can't we downsize?" "Not really. There's so few rentals on the market. And the prices are ridiculous. Alice, sorry Ms Roberts, was quite kind allowing us to live in one of her holiday lets. And even if we could, it wouldn't solve the debt problem: it'd just reduce our outgoings a bit." "Oh!" "Sorry Josh. I'm taking you to B&K's Fem-Factory in the morning. I'm sure they'll take good care of you. Very good care." S xxx
Skinnie S
2025-12-30 07:58:13 +0000 UTCLooking on as his fate is decided. He may be enrolled in a different school next semester.
Lee
2025-12-30 07:15:27 +0000 UTC
