Interlude #1
Added 2022-10-21 22:59:00 +0000 UTCPHEW! Managed to just in time to deliver today just as promised!
Enjoy!
Edit: Made some adjustments and corrected some grammar errors.
Comments
update on the next chapter ?
Aifer
2022-10-30 15:43:35 +0000 UTCReminds me a bit of the "the gamer" webcomic where prophets change the future by predicting it and there is a constant war of prophecies.
Randydandy
2022-10-25 21:00:28 +0000 UTCCorrected. There were a few more errors in the latter part in the chapter :) Rushed through it a bit!
Mosef
2022-10-22 09:43:32 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter! but on page 58 this paragraph was repeated! Perhaps that was part of why she loved him more for it. That despite his growing invulnerability, he’d chosen to be vulnerable to her. He could have easily disappeared and do this alone.
Leonard
2022-10-22 08:58:09 +0000 UTCPuts into perspective the magical Britain takeover. MoS probably foreseeing some result Emily played along with until subverting it. The mantis hunts the cicada, unaware of the oriole behind. Sort of thing
Yeno Memevig
2022-10-22 01:01:12 +0000 UTC
