CH69
Added 2022-09-17 17:27:44 +0000 UTCHello everyone, thanks for the patience and please see Chapter 69!
As always, please let me know what you think and enjoy! :)
Comments
Good! Will be finished for tomorrow. About 90-95% finished. I don't think I'll publish until the evening I think though. It'll be the longest so far I think for this arc and I think you guys are going to really like it too!
Mosef
2022-09-28 02:06:47 +0000 UTCHow's chap 70 going?
Dull Pen
2022-09-27 08:59:00 +0000 UTCHow would that happen? It is a cloak that cowers a single person, or barely cowers three kids. It is not like it lets you fly, or tells you where a secret magical, likely extremely warded island is. The cloak makes you invisible it doesn't let you pass through walls or teleport.
Dull Pen
2022-09-27 08:57:58 +0000 UTCI can imagine a scene where the cloak is used by the Potters to escape to Illos.
Mike
2022-09-21 16:32:48 +0000 UTCCorrect! The Wand is out the game. Only the Cloak remains and it's pretty much unimportant.
Mosef
2022-09-20 19:56:03 +0000 UTCNo if I recall right the wand was used in a blood ritual that turned Grindelwald into somekind of demon
Master Zen
2022-09-20 15:27:31 +0000 UTCThe ICW has the Elder Wand?
pedr5ke
2022-09-20 14:51:01 +0000 UTCI hope you do, it’s a bit hard to remember why some of these factions disagree with each other and aren’t working together.
thevolunteer
2022-09-19 15:56:22 +0000 UTCI plan to! Habe and others will have their povs throughout the story
Mosef
2022-09-19 14:22:49 +0000 UTCAberforth tbf the kind of guy who's probably fed up with revolutions or fighting
Mosef
2022-09-19 13:11:19 +0000 UTCI enjoy the POV format you currently have i.e skipping Atticus and Emily. You should include more peripheral characters like Habe from various to show Illos appeals to them besides the Europeans.
Mike
2022-09-18 16:36:16 +0000 UTCIt would be funny if Aberforth is now involved int the Revolution. Plus, what happen to Dorea/Charles? Was there a break them like how strained Nicholas was with Atticus ?
Mike
2022-09-18 16:33:15 +0000 UTCLets gooooooo hype
Monzter E
2022-09-18 10:52:46 +0000 UTCYes, the artificial wombs were something I've always dismissed. I always found it...sterile and very non-human. With how...large in scope magic is, how interactive it is, it feels...wrong for it to work. Haha, of course that's mentioned! When/If it happens, I expect it'll probably be my most liked post ever!
Mosef
2022-09-18 10:34:46 +0000 UTCPopulation diversity, at present: 70% of adults are British European, the other 30% are more a larger mixture of other Europeans, some Africans and other regions of the world. The youth however are far more of a diverse group, courtesy of the diverse background of the clan children. I'd say under eighteens are probably about 40% are British European and the rest are all around. With the 4,000 incoming Eastern and Balkan Europeans, they'll increase the disparity between Europeans and other peoples but only for a short while as the invitations will go global.
Mosef
2022-09-18 10:31:41 +0000 UTCHa! With the way I'm going it'll look like a scattergraph with the number of factions! Love the idea though! I'm tempted to make one for the hell of it!
Mosef
2022-09-18 10:26:43 +0000 UTCGreat chapter cant wait for the next one
Basilisk Basilisk
2022-09-17 22:33:26 +0000 UTCHope nick was wrong about Atticus him becoming some jesus figure would be a bit boring. Emily still interesting and fun
Yeno Memevig
2022-09-17 21:44:59 +0000 UTCDid Atticus set the the groundwork for the Spartan program!? That the cast aside clone children descendants are likely to evolve to become physically stronger? Well that's a good way to close a plot hole regarding the questions I've seen people asking why Atticus just doesn't just use artificial wombs. And looks like Emily will have to bear at least a couple of children so they can have a heir.
Nicogen
2022-09-17 20:40:17 +0000 UTCThe only thing I got was that Atticus was Magical Jesus
Zulfy
2022-09-17 19:29:55 +0000 UTCDamn.... war never changes..... its seems the magical world is stuck in time, in human societal progression and are chafing in it, refusing to look for an answer.... this is another chunky good chapter gud job..... also i gotta ask what are the population diversity of illos and what other type magical species is allowed on the world ship, can vampires go in it? How about dementors? Or cursed creatures? what about the environmental dependent species like the merpeople? Or large sized species like dragons?.... like the touch of concern from nicholas, this conversation placed an answer to the rapid and radical moves of our hero, love the cold truth that no matter how capable a person is it doesn't mean that anything they do is easy, its just possible, a chance..... and i do wonder on who will be the next dark lord?
Monzter E
2022-09-17 18:34:44 +0000 UTCI’m imagining one of those plus looking political spectrum diagrams. X-axis would be isolation to intergration, y-axis would be magicals suck to magicals are awesome. I’d love to see where you put the different factions on the spectrum. Queen, Revolution, ICW, Dark, Light, Grey, Illosian.
thevolunteer
2022-09-17 17:54:07 +0000 UTCDamn it, to busy to read right now.
Eric
2022-09-17 17:29:00 +0000 UTC
