Chapter 64 Part 2
Added 2022-07-03 18:19:31 +0000 UTCHello All, please see part 2! A lot earlier than planned, somehow managed to write it within a few days!
The next chapter will probably be in a few weeks as it will be a hefty chapter as we conclude Arc two and we FINALLY move into Arc Three which I hope many of you are excited about.
That will have several interludes where that will be part of the universe but focuses on elements of the magical world that happened in between the main story.
Some of them will be Atticus Emily and co seeing the rest of the Magical World...from Asia to Africa to South America.
Depending on how much you guys like such things, I may do it more frequently.
Back to the story at hand, enjoy and please let me know what you think, I really enjoyed seeing 20+ comments on the posts! If you have questions, let me know and I will answer :)
Comments
Amazing, I love this story! I say this as someone who has read close to 100 HP fan stories and this is one of the best. Keep up the good work in the next arc. I hope you can keep this up and make it to the end of your version of Halo.
No Name
2022-07-10 02:15:42 +0000 UTCJust realized that a half formed covenant empire currently exists in the galaxy. Moira will probably run into them at this rate?
Ozzy117
2022-07-07 15:39:00 +0000 UTC:) That is the plan Atticus has in mind yes. But things rarely go to plan as much as he loves to make them. I doubt he could have taken into account what happened in the space of three years when he was making his plans
Mosef
2022-07-06 18:57:42 +0000 UTCThere will be no Dumbledore or Grindelwald boogieloo 2 :) There is no reason for it nor does it contribute to the story...if anything it simply breaks it down from where it is headed and I won't do that :)
Mosef
2022-07-06 18:55:50 +0000 UTCThanks for reading! :)
Mosef
2022-07-06 18:54:24 +0000 UTC;)
Mosef
2022-07-06 18:54:11 +0000 UTCRE Severus Snape...It is something to becomes nigh on impossible tbh, especially with the changes Eileen Prince is/will experience. The Weasleys will feature in the stories, for sure :) As you all know, the Weasley Dumbledore links would have run deep by the time of HP so none of the good and bad that Dumbledore would have put them through will happen. With Atticus actually setting up the stage of magitech, those like the Weasleys, blood traitors who love muggle stuff ;) will find themselves opportunities. Thanks for the long comment, it is a pleasure to read it! :)
Mosef
2022-07-06 18:40:50 +0000 UTCGreat chapter and a good end to the Grindelwald Arc!! Eagerly awaiting next chapter!!!
HydraStark
2022-07-06 10:46:29 +0000 UTCWith Dumbledore and Grindelwald permanently out of the picture the great 5 now have unrivaled power and knowledge. Atticus, Emily, Nicholas, Pernellle and Moira together present a practically ridiculous amount of combined knowledge, power and political influence. I'm assuming they're all going to be on the council in the future?
Ozzy117
2022-07-04 20:12:26 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I’m very satisfied with the way you dealt with Dumbledore and Grindelwald. And please do me a favor and let them rest for good. If Grindelwald or whatever remains of him miraculously returns i think it would just feel boringly shallow, like tv series where at the last episode the evil mastermind in the last scene would always survive, resurrect or miraculously reappear just to justify the next x seasons… so annoying… anyway, great chapter, it will be exciting to see how evrything will play out, all the politicking and science and building! Happy to wait for more.
Jones
2022-07-04 12:34:04 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter keep up the great work
Gilgamos
2022-07-04 06:08:05 +0000 UTCReally missed the Greengrass POV :D
Mike
2022-07-04 01:39:40 +0000 UTCNow the corrupted Lords of Light and Dark have been defeated by the Lord of Grey, and the hidden world will watch in awe as he builds a path to the stars. ............. Normally I'm not a fan of Corrupted Dumbledore, remnants of when I was young and fell in love with the world of Harry Potter. Now as an adult I can see the manipulations he set in place, all in the name of the 'Greater Good'. But it was always done in a cringing way. Not your interpretation of him. His self-assured arrogance that only he had the right to be the most powerful as only he was the one wise enough to use the power in the right way was done marvelously. Now some people will be irked that he was eliminated in such a way but from a strategic point it was done in the best way. He was a dangerous man who could've had used his final battle to turn himself into a martyr trying to stop the rise of a new Dark Lord. No better eliminate him out of the eyes of the public and reduce a man who had ambitions to rule to nothing but a foot note in the annuls of history. 'CLAP! CLAP!' Well done. ...................... Now onto other matters. I'm kind of hoping you still let Severus Snape be born, maybe let his mother have a wild summer. Don't let the woman marry the prick of a muggle as she would have more confidence in herself because of Emily. I find their interaction adorable by the way. I can see Emily talking to her and when she walks away to do something else suddenly she stops mid step wide eyed as she realizes 'Wait do I have a friend?!' Anyway Severus was a powerful wizard in his own right even with Dumbledore sabotaging everyone's progress. Its almost sacrilege to let such potential go to waste. Especially if he is raised by a mother whose own potential was fully realized. Plus Atticus will need a talented Potion Master who are willing to experiment with all the new ingredients on new worlds. Plus Alan Rickman. Next subject and one I just thought of now. Arthur Weasley. Not as talented as Severus but its his fascination with Muggles and their technology that makes him an asset. The man managed to magically enhance a car to fly, turn invisible and gain sentience (somehow?). All the while raising seven kids SEVEN, two of which were freaking Fred and George.(Two brilliant lords of chaos.) In canon he was seen as a fool for his fascination but with a figure like Atticus who has gone on record saying he studied muggle science, well it makes you wonder how will he be viewed in this new timeline? I was about to ask about the Golden Trio but that's a little far in the future to ask about now so I'll wait for a time skip to ask about them. Anyways until next time my friend. Keep up the good work.
Nicogen
2022-07-04 01:38:01 +0000 UTCThis is great
anthony boucard
2022-07-03 20:53:38 +0000 UTCKeep up the good work. Looking forward to reading more of your work
ghosthammer
2022-07-03 20:02:24 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter. Love the intensity and the attention to detail
ghosthammer
2022-07-03 20:01:58 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
Alex Leyden
2022-07-03 18:56:36 +0000 UTC
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