Encyclopaedia Elyden - Bladder Eel facts
Added 2019-05-29 09:00:01 +0000 UTCThe attached image is from the taxonomical section of the Encyclopaedia Elyden and is a continuation of the recent series I started.
This one features a more fictional example to what I've posted so fer - the so-called bladder eel, which glides through the air in regions where the Firmament holds sway.
Please let me know what you think!
Thanks :)
Comments
Seeing repeated explanations that 'mucus' is only ever the noun, and 'mucous' is only ever the adjective. It took me three readings before I clicked why what you wrote felt vaguely wrong to me. Could just be a regional thing (e.g. UK / US / CA / AU variations).
Eric Scheid
2019-05-29 17:14:12 +0000 UTCThanks - I've updated the master document. 1 - added 'open' 2 - nothing wrong here - the second quote continues to say that they are also common in skylands - basically the floating mountains of pandora. 3 - updated to anchoring 4 - i looked this up before writing it and it seems as though they're interchangeable. 5 - changed to determined.
Nate Mangion
2019-05-29 16:45:02 +0000 UTCProofreading: 1. "allowing them to up to 120°" 2. "rocky environs" vs "common in wetlands" 3. "ancoring" 4. mucus, or mucous? 5. "stubborn trainers" .. or "determined trainers" (vs stubborn eels)?
Eric Scheid
2019-05-29 15:35:07 +0000 UTCVery cool. Pity they are mostly solitary, I'd like to imaging great flocks washing down a mountainside.
Eric Scheid
2019-05-29 15:05:20 +0000 UTC
