Behind the Neighbor's Door - Part 5
Added 2025-05-12 10:20:25 +0000 UTCHere is part 5! I had some issues with timelini
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awesome story...love it
Ronnie Blankenship
2025-08-10 22:38:17 +0000 UTCI love this story it is fantastic reminds me a bit of NC. He will be great if things escalated between Nate and Grace. Grace is telling Norlan everything that happened however when he goes out with nate He seems to tell him a few other things that has happened. Needing him into conflict. When he talks to Grace see then confirms it happened but she forgot to tell him. Nolan nose in a few weeks time he has to go away for the weekend cuz of business. Studying on the internet about all this stuff that is going on now He comes across people who have said about hidden cameras that look like normal day stuff like plug sockets a kettle but inside there's a sound and video detector. Also about putting spyware onto the phone. Nolan nose it is wrong but we've been going away soon he decides to do it he buys a few different stuff and also waits for the perfect opportunity to put spyware onto Grace's phone. He makes way has a spare phone which he classifies as work. And also will not be able to look at this stuff during the day as everything is far too busy but at night time when they sat in the hotel he will be able to check one of the cameras could be a nice light on the balcony which allows him to secretly rotate it so he can look into Nate's place and with sound he can hear everything. It even gets to see this special bikini It is fun anna summers if you can call it a bikini it hardly covers anything leaving very little to the imagination. That is not the only thing that has got Nolan interest the sexy little underwear that seems to be coming out that he'd never seen. The going away as well for the weekend falls upon a night out between Nate and grace. Could you imagine how Nolan must be thinking so nervous should he look at this stuff should he not should he really listen in to grace his phone look at the texts and the pictures should he not is GPS on it showing where they are. You would have to fight with it feelings or should he wait until he gets home and see if Grace tells him everything. I think we need a bit more suspense something that holds people otherwise this story is just another cuckold. Like a few others that you have written and many other people no real difference. We need the husband to be on edge listening thinking going crazy in his mind. That is what makes a story exciting.
Tony Midwood
2025-08-10 12:40:20 +0000 UTCJust because they had this full disclosure doesn’t mean that she can’t keep leaving him in the dark. The way I see it now that they have had this conversation with Nate, it will let things progress a little easier and faster between them. And my hope is that Grace will want to move a little faster and further than Nolan is comfortable with and she will decide to start keeping a lot of things from Nolan. I think that this will make the story even better.
Ron
2025-07-13 05:21:34 +0000 UTCI loved it!!!
Claudio
2025-07-13 00:37:52 +0000 UTCYet she still doesn’t know that her boyfriend witnessed the act and knows that Nate has a lot more to offer her in the bedroom than him, yet here we are. I think sometimes we are supposed to forget what we know and about what should play a factor into what the characters do. I don’t know about you, but I sure as hell after witnessing a guy with a huge dick fucking my future sister in law into next week would not allow her to be alone with him.
FU
2025-06-18 05:23:35 +0000 UTCYour writing style is very interesting and draws the reader in, but you have a tendency for your characters to hash and rehash things before they decide to do exactly what we knew they would do. It’s taken awhile to get here, where we all know it was heading when they first moved in. I sure hope that it gets a little more sexual with Nate bedding her in the next chapter maybe after dinner and dancing, she’s so turned on that they walk right into his apartment without fanfare and fuck the night away, with open doors and Nolan on his patio listening to her screams of ecstasy.
FU
2025-06-18 05:08:06 +0000 UTCSo Grace falls for the act of guy who can’t get women but she knows her friend had sex with him? Not sure I follow why most writers make the women in the stories into just sex addicts. I think slowing the pace would be better.
CC
2025-05-26 08:29:34 +0000 UTCGood writing,as ever,but the direction of the "full disclosure ", I feel missed a trick.It's a shame because it was so hot to leave him in the dark.Imagine if she left to go next door to feed and tend to his plants,but when she comes back her hair is tied back and her breath smells a little weird .But she denies anything happened and feigns annoyance at the constant questions.Oh well,nevermind, I can keep on dreaming. 🤣
Amer Gill
2025-05-24 10:08:40 +0000 UTCI'm not sure how I feel about the full transparency thing, it may have deflated things a little. However, I am loving that Grace already knows that she wants to take it all the way, it's just a matter of leading her boyfriend there. Having her be so instrumental in their own downfall is pretty hot. Normally these things are the manipulation mastermind getting the girlfriend/wife to push their boundaries little by little, so this is a pretty refreshing take to me.
Display Name Here
2025-05-20 15:56:24 +0000 UTCWe all want to see Grace next door wearing the bikini Nate supplied. She's sunbathing on Nate' deck. Nolan on his deck listening. Nate then takes Grace into his apartment, Nolan can hear Nate tell her to kneel in front of him. Nolan shared her love of getting a cock rubbed all over that pretty face. Nate says ..."I heard you like a cock smeared all over that face" - Grace's reply as she looks up. She says YES! SideNote: Keep Nolan in the dark about all things. It's way hotter!
Sask306
2025-05-14 14:39:40 +0000 UTCI agree in principle and would have maybe liked for it to have continued without them talking to Nate. But things were escalating quickly so there wasn't anywhere to take the story other than going straight to the sex. So I think it may work better this way. I'd like to think that we'll have the bits that Nolan knows about and the bits that he doesn't know about, as Grace keeps things that are against the 'rules' from him because she's enjoying it and doesn't want him to halt proceedings. Which will make it even more like cheating than it was before as she probably would have told Nolan previously. So I'm hoping that will make it very interesting.
Gabby
2025-05-13 06:50:38 +0000 UTCIn most scene's when Nate is fondling her she says how turned on she's getting during the inner monologue bits, and how she knows it's wrong but she wants more to happen. It's even portrayed as a battle between her mind and body, her mind being sensible but her body not only wanting it but craving it. So not sure where you're getting her not enjoying it in any capacity from?
Gabby
2025-05-13 06:33:19 +0000 UTCAlthough it wasn't said, nor particularly implied with any words, I'm sure an earlier chapter said that Nate took a copy of Nolan's car keys, so in my head, Nate went down and opened Nolan's car door after his encounter with Grace in the kitchen, to drain his battery so he'd get to drive her to ballet the next morning. The events in the kitchen after the drunk Nolan was put to bed was a longer scene than I expected too. It felt like a 15 second thing when told from Nolan's perspective last chapter rather than the several minutes it actually turned out to be. Nothing wrong with that, Nolan was in and out of sleep of course so maybe he caught snippets. But I still found it surprising, I thought it would be a quick thing like Nate grabbing her ass, Grace admonishing him and hushed words as she ushers him out the door.
Gabby
2025-05-13 06:27:43 +0000 UTCA month is a long time for no physical contact, whilst everything else they will be doing is going on. Which means this may become too slow burn during that time. Almost a step back from recent happenings rather than the slow escalation. So I hope there is physical contact during the next month, maybe behind Nolan's back that Grace doesn't tell him about. Meaning the date after one month still happens because Nolan believes Nate's been good and has stuck by the no touching rule. Then the one month date can be where it escalates into actual sex.
Gabby
2025-05-13 06:13:30 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter, and I like how things are developing.
Robert
2025-05-13 05:27:09 +0000 UTCPrevious poster mentioned it, but keeping Nate in the dark and maybe having him slowly degrade into liking being cucked rather than it being a fantasy could have been interesting. This is kind of a trend in a lot of your work, so I think it would be new and fresh to maybe shift the dynamic from story to story, explore the mindset of a man being cheated on against his will rather than someone who enables it.
Nick
2025-05-12 21:57:16 +0000 UTCI like the slow burn, and the cliff hanger from the previous chapter....but it's also sounding like she's just getting assaulted and then telling herself to be okay with it for her husbands sake. I mean, there's probably a big picture I'm missing...or if she was secretly into it but trying not to show...but it doesn't sound like she's enjoying it in any capacity when its happening and just telling herself it's alright later and to accept it....which feels kinda bad.
Ryan Phillison
2025-05-12 20:37:53 +0000 UTCJust a comment when Nolan and grace are talking in the bedroom about where this goes you accidentally said Nate said. This is the exact line "I do," Nate said. "And yeah it is a bit difficult. There are no manuals for this. At least not that I know of." I think that was supposed to still be Nolan unless I missed something.
Alan Michener
2025-05-12 20:30:30 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! It should have been titled “The Art of the Deal.” I hope the next chapter has more action than one pee-pee touch over clothes. I also hope there’s some overheard action.
Jake
2025-05-12 20:18:02 +0000 UTCIs it June yet?!
neegan
2025-05-12 17:55:22 +0000 UTCI'm not necessarily opposed to them talking about this with Nate and sharing Nolan's fetish here, but I was kind of hoping they had decided against sharing it with him. I really enjoy this story still, but thought the conversation with Nate was a little out there, and them agreeing to a date a month instead of Grace suddenly having more and more excuses to be around Nate. That being said, still really enjoying the story so far and cant wait to see where it goes.
Mondo36
2025-05-12 17:38:53 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter, love this story!
Reader79
2025-05-12 16:57:33 +0000 UTCDamn it’s getting juicy only thing I hate is waiting a month for the next one 😂
Azrael Arisen
2025-05-12 15:57:44 +0000 UTCI really like the build up of tension and Nolan writing down what he likes and doesn’t like. I think his fantasy of overhearing them fooling around or the idea of suddenly hearing the bed start creaking is some of the best teasing writing there is. Cant wait for more!
Ricky Spanish
2025-05-12 15:21:35 +0000 UTCAmazing, always look forward to reading more of this! Might be slow but it definitely racks up the tension. Look forwadd to the next chapter!
Jay
2025-05-12 11:54:07 +0000 UTCFirst !
Chris N
2025-05-12 11:00:08 +0000 UTC
