My Neighbor - Part 11
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Yeah, poor John. One thing he asked her to do was use contraceptives. But this Cunt couldn’t wait as Tony had edged her right into making the biggest mistake of her life. The only other possibility for her being pregnant is that she was fucking John constantly before she left And could be his but I was doing a paternity test. Unless you find a way miscarries, but even then I would ask the doctors to perform a fetal blood test just to see if it exposes her debauchery. The story is like a car wreck. I feel sorry for the characters, but I just can’t help but look and see how many limbs are hanging out of the car and on the ground, we all love a nice accident, so we will keep reading
FU
2024-11-21 19:22:16 +0000 UTCDon't know anymore. Very well written as usual but Tony not likable which I get is the point. Louise is losing her appeal and John becoming a sideline character. I'm hoping she gets exposes or John makes her face some real consequences for her decisions. Might give this one a miss for a while and read your other tales that I prefer
jaymie worrell
2024-11-16 01:08:36 +0000 UTCExcellent
LH_reads
2024-10-21 23:14:17 +0000 UTCMidway through this story I found myself disliking Louise, which means that the story is doing its job very well! 'Make me your woman' has so many levels to it and I'm curious about how Louise and Emily might rekindle their friendship somehow.
Shando Fenindra
2024-10-16 16:29:25 +0000 UTCIf there's anything that would completely ruin the story for me, it would be that
James
2024-10-14 18:01:02 +0000 UTCBest chapter so far I think. I love the emotional process Louise is going through falling slowly for tony. I would like to see what’s going on in his mind as well. For him make her his woman a try to steal her. I want to see her pregnant but not too fast maybe make a decision with John I want her to convince him that’s what he wants. I need a lot more the dialogue between her and John he has to make a progress towards in his struggle and before her being pregnant he has to eat a lot of cream pies and try to compete with tony on his husband rights. Outstanding work 🔥🔥
Migmig
2024-09-21 05:56:46 +0000 UTCDon't you think she would notice
John Lewis
2024-09-15 16:16:58 +0000 UTCGreat as usual.
John Lewis
2024-09-15 16:16:03 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter and great story development. Loved the level of detail every step of the way, until the end, with the submission feeling sort of rushed. Don't know where you're headed but I'd love for it to sort of stay stable on this track development and not go fully mental as some stories seem to do after a while. If you feel that's where you have to take it it's better to round it off nicely and focus on Lisa!
Jon Boge
2024-09-15 10:02:32 +0000 UTCDidn't think about that, could be true after rereading but I really hope you're wrong. With all this buildup over two chapters for some random Colby to slide in would be a little disappointed. The buildup has been towards Tony and I hope that's where we landed...
Jon Boge
2024-09-15 09:59:06 +0000 UTCIt’s prob not Tony
Chris N
2024-09-14 13:51:28 +0000 UTC
