Book 5 - Chapter 19
Added 2025-08-22 18:59:46 +0000 UTCBrin didn't get anything from the meeting. The wards were too strong, but they dropped immediately when it was done and the aftermath told him nearly as much as the meeting might have. Down in a prominent position of the oval was a man who must be General Grimwalt. He was just like Lumina described; thin, dark, and severe-looking. He stood with a hand raised, still in the position of dismissing the meeting.
Galan stood behind him, looking as calm and confident as ever. Maybe it was Brin's imagination, but he couldn't help but think that position behind Grimwalt was significant. A supporting role, but not a subservient one.
He saw Galan meet eyes with sir Caradawg, and something unspoken passed between them. A clenched jaw. A nod.
He noticed that Lyssa wasn't with Galan, and grinned when he saw that she was actually in his group, with the escorts who were waiting outside the meeting. Galan might trust her, but apparently no one else did.
Cid found him in short order and together they hustled to get ahead of the crowd.
Brin asked, "How did it go? Did they agree to work together?"
"It's hard to tell. Officially, General Grimwalt is leading this force and they've already all agreed to follow his commands. He had a big long speech about unity and following orders, and then everybody insisted that they've already been doing that this whole time," said Cid.
"So nothing has changed?" asked Brin.
"I didn't say that. We've been taking losses. The plague, and the assassins. There are a lot of faces I expected to see at that meeting that weren't there, and I don't think it's because they slept in. People are beginning to think we might lose, and that's motivating," said Cid.
"Wouldn't it be the opposite?" asked Brin.
"We all took a risk coming out here. You have to think about what's going to happen if we come home in failure. The Orders that stayed home will poach our monsters and lure away our best recruits. Lords that return home will see their peers testing their borders and trying to undermine their authority. The [King] of Prinnash would definitely lose his crown, and there would probably be a civil war."
They nodded to the sentries on the way out, and Brin made sure that he didn't have any illusions running so that the enchantments on the threshold wouldn't pick anything up from him.
"So we need to win. But do you think that would be enough for them to take this seriously?" he asked.
"Maybe not on its own, but sir Galan dropped another artillery spell on us. Can I ask you something? How close are [Archmage] Lumina and sir Galan? Does Lumina listen to him? And [Archmage] Lumina and General Grimwalt?"
"Lumina and Galan are friends. Lumina respects him a lot; I think she'd take any request he made seriously," said Brin.
"I can forgive you calling your mother by her name, but you should get in the habit of addressing your superiors by their titles. It'll land you in trouble if someone hears that other than me," said Cid.
"Sorry. I could never presume to guess the mind of her radiance the [Archmage of the Mystical Elements] Lumina on the esteemed and honorable General Grimwalt..."
Cid rolled his eyes and Brin laughed. "Lumina doesn't like General Grimwalt, and she feels strongly that he owes her a favor."
"Hm."
"So what's this about Galan and an artillery spell?" asked Brin.
"A metaphorical artillery spell. He just got back from coordinating with the northern and western armies, and apparently, they've both been wildly successful. They're tearing through Arcaena with little resistance. Unless something big changes, Lord Maddox is going to capture the capitol before anyone else can get there," said Cid.
Now that they were well past the threshold, Brin spun up a few directed threads to send out a swarm of Invisible Eyes. It was funny how quickly he could get acclimated to things, but he felt naked without a swarm of surveillance drones in the sky. There was a big gap of empty space between the Commander's Camp and the rest of the army, presumably so that any spies trying to approach the camp wouldn't have anything to hide behind.
Brin put his mind back to the ramifications of what Cid was saying. If Olland captured the capitol... that was a disaster for both Frenaria and Prinnash. The [King] of Prinnash was escorting the Frenarian army while his loyal general led the western army. He'd keep his legitimacy if either of those got to the capitol first. Meanwhile, Prinnash didn't have much of a navy, so Frenaria's shipping lanes would be secure as long as anyone except Olland took the capital. It was two against one, but that one was in the lead. "That's huge."
Cid nodded. "It gets better. Sir Galan told everyone that Lord Maddox owes him a debt of honor. Maddox will delay entry into the capitol until the other two forces arrive... but only if Galan agrees that the other two armies, in his words, 'are engaging with acceptable devotion in this righteous mission for which they have agreed to lend their strength'."
It was a testament to how much he'd integrated the Order's culture, because Brin didn't doubt for a second that all of that was true. Galan wouldn't lie about that. If you didn't trust him, then trust Lothar, who publicly accepted Galan as a true friend and a man of honor, despite the fact that they were in stark disagreement about this war.
Brin looked back and saw Galan. He was walking with sir Ectar, a man Brin had never met but who was second in command of this division of the Order. Sir Caradawg was next to him, now a key ally, maybe because of a debt that Brin was owed for how he'd been treated in Dustrim. Lyssa walked on the other side, looking positively gleeful. And why shouldn't she? Galan wasn't much of a schemer, but Brin could recognize the look of a manipulator whose plans had all just come together. Galan probably agreed to this, because he was convinced that a real leader was necessary to save lives and win the war, but he wouldn't have come up with the plan. This was Lyssa's doing.
Galan, always running around talking to everyone. Never any time for his own levels or even his own men. Because he was too agreeable and couldn't say no? Or because he was arduously working at getting this fractured conglomerate all pointed in the same direction. Pointed in the same direction... behind him. Brin couldn't say what Galan and Lyssa had been up to these past months, but he could see the result plain as day. Olland was united behind him. The majority of Frenaria was united behind Grimwalt, who listened to Lumina, who was now putting her support behind Galan.
Brin used [Wyrdic Inspect]. Galan's levels still weren't visible, but now his Class was hidden, too. All that showed was that he was Galan, the Wartime Commander of the Order of the Long Sleep. The Wyrd had more information. Strings of obligation and authority tied Galan to everything. Everything and everyone.
Brin had been wishing that their side of the war had a leader and now it did, and that leader was Galan.
The thought should have thrilled him, but instead he could only worry. They were surrounded by some of the strongest [Knights] in the world, but here in the empty space between camps was the most exposed Galan would ever be.
Brin summoned more Invisible Eyes, watched the area with increased scrutiny, and saw nothing. That wasn't a sure thing; [Know What's Real] didn't warn him of invisible lurkers unless he was looking right at them. Should he try lasers?
No, for once, he was just going to trust his hunch. Something was off, and if being a knight had taught him anything, it was to act. Act first, think later, and second guess never.
Brin pulled an Eveladis out of Lumina's ring and threw it towards Galan. The second it left his fingers, a huge black lance, thrumming with power and almost as thick as a tree trunk, was sprouting from Galan's chest.
Later, Brin would go over this moment again and again with [Memories in Glass] and he would get a useful order of events. He would see Galan notice the assassin come out of invisibility first and push Lyssa aside. He would see Lyssa duck under his arm and step forward to block. The lance batted her sword aside, the assassin moving the huge weapon as if it were made of styrofoam, and gouged straight through her forearm, past her, and through Galan's chest. Galan had both arms up to grab the weapon, but his strength wasn't enough to stop it. The lance went straight through his enchanted plate as if it were paper, burst through his body, and out the other side.
Sir Ectar sliced straight through the assassin, cutting him in half from waist to armpit, but the determined assassin continued the attack with the last of his strength.
Only, it wasn't the last of his strength. Threads of Mana pulled the assassin's body back together. Brin recognized that ability. That was a [Mana Scars], the power of a [Scarred One], or maybe a Wight. Brin didn't [Inspect] him in real time so he couldn't be sure, but he had enough time to burn the man's face into his memory. He was ordinary-looking, light haired but with Prinnashian features. Handsome, maybe. He gave a roguish smile even before he even finished pulling his body back together. He saluted, and then smirked when a follow-up swing cut off his hand and through his neck. Then he disappeared into a swarm of flapping wings which quickly faded away.
In real time, Brin saw little of that. By the time his thrown Eveladis landed and broke open, it was over. He didn't even have time to register the presence of the assassin before he faded away. Suddenly, there was a black lance in Galan's chest, and everyone was shouting.
Brin got a front-row seat to how much of a curse high Vitality could be, because even with his heart pierced, Galan didn't die right away. He stood, stubbornly, until that was too much and he sank to his knees. Someone ran for a healer, using [Knight's Charge] for extra speed. Men frantically debated whether to pull out the dark lance or break it. Could this even be healed? By anyone? And yet, Galan held on, giving Brin a foolish hope that he'd make it long enough.
Galan wheezed, trying and failing to breath. He gasped out that they should remove the lance, but they ignored him. Caradawg held the lance in place and Ectar snapped off the back so that Galan could lay down.
A [Knight] returned, carrying a [Wound Binder] named Luelle over his shoulder. He'd strung [Knight's Charges] one after another to make his way in record time. The [Wound Binder] herself was level 41, and while many healers had fallen during the disease attacks, she was one of those who'd risen as a hero. Despite the plain-sounding Class, it was said that she could heal anything short of death.
Dizzy and disoriented from being carried with such speed, Luelle wasted no time in dropping to her knees beside Galan. He grabbed her wrist and wheezed, "Lyssa first."
She pushed his arm away and bent back to examine him, but Galan pushed her again. Luelle took one glance at Lyssa. Lyssa hadn't even registered how bad her arm was; it was hanging by a strand of muscle, the bone and half the arm torn straight through. She covered it with her hand and turned away when Luelle looked.
Luelle plucked a green leaf from her pouch, popped it in her mouth, and chewed. Then she spat it out and pressed it to the bone jutting from Lyssa's arm. "For the poison. If you want to keep your hand, you'll need to see a healer right now. That won't be me, though."
She turned back to Galan, and said, "Pull it out! And get this plate off!"
Ectar pulled the rest of the lance from Galan's chest while another [Knight] started fumbling with his armor. Luelle got to work, moving as quickly in her field as a [Knight] would in his. Brin only recognized some of what she did, pressing herbs and sewing flesh. She also traced strange runes into his skin, and muttered incantations, burning some herbs in a little censor that hung on a chain from her neck. She made bandages and pressed them into place, only to remove them a second later to see what the effect had been.
Other healers were brought. Some, Luelle integrated into her work, and some she sent away with barely a glance. Of those, one man started working on Lyssa's arm. Lyssa hardly seemed to notice, and stood staring at Galan as if nothing else existed in the world. She was stoic at first, but her lips began to tremble the longer Galan lay on the ground and the color bled from his face.
Brin watched the entire time, and there was nothing he could do. Somehow, he'd gotten this far without a single healing Skill that could help other people.
He watched, until Luelle stopped moving. She sat back with a sigh, and closed her eyes. "There's nothing more I can do. The poison, and the wound... A ruptured heart will always kill, and his was more than ruptured. He's dead. He's been dead for the last two minutes, by my estimation.
"No!" Lyssa cried, and rushed forward to fall on Galan's broken chest. She cupped his chin in a hand, peered into his eyes. "No, no..."
"Keep trying!" sir Ectar shouted. "There must still be something you can do. Do you want gold? Are there resources you need?"
Luelle stood her ground. "There is nothing to be done."
"Lies!" Then Ectar was grabbing her around the neck, lifting her in the air. "You--"
"Stop this at once!" Caradawg shouted, and pushed Ectar's arm back down, prying his fingers away from her neck.
Ectar paled and stepped back, eyes wide. "I apologize--"
Caradawg's mustache quivered in outrage. "You shame yourself, sir!"
“I do. My deepest apologies. I…”
Meanwhile, Lyssa sobbed against Galan's prone form, hardly noticing the healers who still worked diligently to save her arm. If ever there was any doubt that she truly cared for him, it was laid to rest beside the man himself. She'd been plotting for Galan, not against him. You had to care a lot about a man to put aside your own personal ambition and scheme to raise him up instead. She’d laid the might of three nations at his feet.
At the same time, one could argue that her detractors had been correct. She’d killed him. She’d made him a target by giving him that much power, and he hadn’t even lasted an hour.
Brin swallowed the lump in his throat, trying not to break down in front of all these men. His sympathy for poor Lyssa and his own personal sorrow were warring with the feelings of hot rage he was planning for the first person who dared to voice the thoughts he’d just been having a second ago.
Lyssa wept. "No. You promised. You promised you wouldn't die. How could you?"
Brin couldn't believe it either. Galan always seemed so invincible...
No. He actually couldn't believe it. He felt his emotions fading like an unneeded heavy cloak as his analytical side took over. Was this the [Delusionist], or was this in himself all along? It didn’t matter. He needed to think straight. There was something there. Galan seemed invincible. Why did that thought strike him as something with such profundity? Because, he realized, Galan seemed invincible to the Wyrd, too. He seemed invincible to Brin's real senses, not just to his sentimentality. He had one last hope. It wasn’t even a stupid hope, because he still didn't know what Skill Galan had chosen to evolve after the System Quest.
He stepped forward and helped Luelle to her feet, who was still coughing on the ground and rubbing her neck. He brushed the dirt off her robes, and said, "I have a favor to ask."
She had admirable compassion in her eyes. Despite her rough treatment, she understood. "Ask."
"Can you repair his body? Galan doesn't deserve to have his flesh corrupted away by wicked poison, or to have his heart left in pieces. He deserves to be whole when we cast his body atop the pyre."
She sighed. "It would be a waste. I could use these herbs to heal the living."
"Please. I'll pay whatever is required," said Brin.
"No, I will," said Ectar. "And I will go gather more personally, so that the war does not suffer from the medicine's lack."
"Very well," said Luelle.
She got to work. The sun was hot, and it was dusty, and not a single soul thought about leaving. It was a sacred moment, a last gift to a good man, a man who could have united them. For Brin, it was an anguishing wait, a time of desperate hope.
Luelle destroyed the poison. She adjusted his bones, sewed his organs back in place, and then bound his wounds. Lyssa moved where she needed, but she never left his side. When Luelle was done, Lyssa laid her head on the white bandages against his chest. Her sobs had given way to miserable, shut-eye, draining tears.
Then her eyes shot open.
She sat up, blinking. "What?"
Galan lifted a hand and then clenched it into a fist. His voice was quiet, but carried in the silence. Even the wind didn't dare make a sound. "I promised... didn't I? I will not... die."
Of course, Brin should've known the second that Lyssa claimed he'd promised her he wouldn't die. Galan would never make a promise he didn't know he would keep.
Galan's hand dropped, and he appeared to all the world to be dead again, but his Status had been altered. His Class was showing.
Deathless Knight
Brin let out a whoop, cheering in relief, but no one else took it up. They were all too stunned, but Brin knew.
Arcaena had made her first big mistake of the war. She never should've sent that assassin. They had a leader. A good man, of unquestionable honor, and no assassin would undo this army. Their leader was immune to death.
The End of Part 1
Comments
I feel like he's not that powerful. He might be a direct subordinate of the first guy, Jhaartael the [Mage Hunter Commander], but there's no way a guy with a leadership class does a solo op. Both of the others are possible, especially considering with his skill-set, a Wight or a sun-walking vampire makes sense. But with how much Aberfa warned against these guys I think they're at a level we haven't seen yet (in this war, I mean).
Simon Andriessen
2025-08-27 09:34:10 +0000 UTCAlso, I’m about 75% sure that Gallan is the puppet and Lothar is a red herring.
Douglas Lilley
2025-08-26 13:05:38 +0000 UTCI’m going to go ahead and predict that Lissa is actually Arcana.
Douglas Lilley
2025-08-26 11:27:06 +0000 UTCI wonder if assassin was one of the champions mentioned in book 3. One of these seem to fit, Wight the most. "Fear Jhaartael the [Mage Hunter Commander], if not for yourself, then for those you love. Fear Zaff the Wight, first risen of Arcaena. Fear Tarasynora the Vampire who walks in the sun."
Tadas
2025-08-25 13:19:22 +0000 UTCI would love a side story from galan's pov, or even just one pov chapter where he summarizes the past since he killed lyssa's brother, and up to now.
Neo
2025-08-23 21:22:59 +0000 UTCOr did I understand Cid wrong. The way it was explained I felt like modifiër in front > no modifiër > modifiër behind? But maybe the modifiër behind still has some benefit that they're better at that one thing than without a modifiër and not as good at the rest? That's more in line with what we've seen from abilities that people with classes with modifiërs have.
Simon Andriessen
2025-08-23 13:32:28 +0000 UTCidk if this is the best place to discuss this but is it practically impossible to become an [Archmage]? I mean, one of the most OP characters we've come across, the [Archmage of Chaos] has that modifiër behind his class. That means he's not a full [Archmage]. Hell, from what Cid explained, it's almost like a full Archmage would have full access to the powers of the [Archmage of Chaos], as well as any other [Archmage of ...] class we've seen? But it doesn't seem to fully work like that, because Cowl as a [Knight of Burdens] has a skill [Carry Burdens] that we have not seen on any other plain [Knight]? Is it just a limit of how many skills you have and any knight could theoretically take the skill but they took another? Anyway this was all brought on by seeing Galan be a [Deathless Knight] which is so awesome! I'm guessing [Sleepless] evolved to [Deathless] when he used the boon on it?
Simon Andriessen
2025-08-23 13:28:20 +0000 UTCSo if restoring the body is necessary, did Brin just save Galan's life? Did he just speed up the recovery? Or would he not recover on his own, possibly leading to him actually being destroyed by the funeral pyre because after that his body can't even be restored? Or would a spell from an Archmage that could return the ashes back into his 'dead' body still be able to 'revive' him? Would he be cursed as a bound soul to the ashes until someone does that? Sooooo many questions on how this 'Deathless' business works.
Simon Andriessen
2025-08-23 13:06:09 +0000 UTCGotta love Caradawg acting all righteous like he didn't try to get some kids killed last time he appeared.
Saltymen
2025-08-23 12:16:25 +0000 UTCCould you add a description of what happened to the Eveladis bottle? I'm assuming it revealed the assassin but it wasn't stated. Just a sudden description of the assassin smiling
Julia Pennoyer
2025-08-23 04:41:23 +0000 UTCSuper interesting thought. Though maybe it would just be Survivor? Or Patient? Though some epic class like At War With Yourself would be awesome
Julia Pennoyer
2025-08-23 04:38:01 +0000 UTCI could see the excuse being shock, and leaving things to the professionals. Like indecision about what would help the most. Like what if the heart started pumping and that spread the poison throughout the body and killed Galan faster? That kind of second-guessing. But I would like to see that written out, instead the entire incident Brin just standing there, narrating what others were doing.
Julia Pennoyer
2025-08-23 04:36:33 +0000 UTCTyftc
Kevin O'Malley
2025-08-23 04:17:00 +0000 UTCcapitol->capital*
ThoMiCroN
2025-08-22 23:18:17 +0000 UTCGood chapter. Unexpected twists a couple times. I will say, I feel like Bryns character he would have made an illusionary heart, and made it real with the wyrd, only for it to not be enough. Seems weird he just sat there.
Halfcrzy
2025-08-22 23:17:55 +0000 UTCDope af, tftc mate!
Kananiio
2025-08-22 21:54:43 +0000 UTCI've been a bit disappointed to see Galen come down from the all powerful hero he appeared at first to just another army commander. It's so nice to see him be awe-inspiring again. I also love how this epic romantic and political drama has been playing out while Brin was busy being a knight. Hopefully someone has all the juicy details written down for when this becomes an illusionist movie.
Jess
2025-08-22 21:44:56 +0000 UTCThere are many ending for Galan other then death. He can be sealed with oaths and magic. Or he loses his will to live and choses to die by giving up his class / skills. Or he eventually ascends. Becoming a demigod.
wanderer117
2025-08-22 21:24:21 +0000 UTCGiven the lore we've seen so far all undead die then are brought back. Stronger undead take steps before they die to improve themselves after death but they still need to die. The closest to an exception are vampires that change at the moment of death.
wanderer117
2025-08-22 21:22:19 +0000 UTCSame! I went back half way through to check what Brin thought and I was like “oh shit this is really happening”
Tom C
2025-08-22 20:11:21 +0000 UTCHad me in the first part NGL! Fucking hell what a rollercoaster awesome, awesome stuff TFTC!
Tom C
2025-08-22 20:10:27 +0000 UTC"Their leader was immune to death." What a line. Talk of immunity game me an idle thought: I can just imagine the class some kids get if they had an immune system that attacks their own body though - if they live to see system day.
Hell 5pawn
2025-08-22 20:08:49 +0000 UTCOh. The Order of the Long Sleep - or, in other words, the Order of Death. I wonder if Galan is still technically living, or if he's some sort of psudo-undead, but in a gods-endorsed manner.
rhekke
2025-08-22 20:04:35 +0000 UTCOh that was awesome.
Jasus
2025-08-22 19:58:52 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2025-08-22 19:57:13 +0000 UTCGalan the bossss
Pocket Rikimaru Thanatos
2025-08-22 19:51:30 +0000 UTCOh my god I was so scared worf effect but no it was a plot!
Pocket Rikimaru Thanatos
2025-08-22 19:51:24 +0000 UTCWhat a ride this chapter was! 10/10 ! Perfect end to part 1 and an excellent pivoting point to transition to a Hogg interlude!
Justin Young
2025-08-22 19:44:12 +0000 UTCHe’s gotta be able to die somehow. I guess if you never put his body back together he’ll never revive. Maybe if you burn him to ash he stays dead too.
Adunn
2025-08-22 19:43:13 +0000 UTCDisagree. There probably is logic to it that is unknown. You only learn through confrontation.
Adunn
2025-08-22 19:42:20 +0000 UTCI mean, he got zero credit for creating all those fake suns that *probably* single-handedly saved the battle and untold lives. I get that his illusion class is a secret, but enough people know that he should have gotten something, I reckon.
Heraclitus
2025-08-22 19:40:22 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter, thank you!
Hypnotical
2025-08-22 19:40:05 +0000 UTCDamn, I really thought he was going to die then 😮
Tom
2025-08-22 19:28:36 +0000 UTCEnemies to Lovers is my favorite.
Nyroe
2025-08-22 19:27:21 +0000 UTCOh FUCK yes. That was incredible. I hope Brin gets some SERIOUS credit for saving Galan. Twice!
Logrus
2025-08-22 19:26:34 +0000 UTCHey, I love your work. Feedback: I hate how many people seem to just put device escape in this series - two different great witches and now this guy. Please create more logic around how the ability works, the limitations and mitigation strategies. Can it only be used once a week, moves you a mile and leaves you drained afterwards? At this point, I'm wondering how these high level people ever manage to get killed.
Matt
2025-08-22 19:24:11 +0000 UTCDamn I would’ve been so sad if Galan died! 😭
Sam
2025-08-22 19:24:01 +0000 UTC