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ASRIEL Update #2: Rough transcript for the ASRIEL animation details

below is a rough transcript of how the animation will go for my ASRIEL animation, was a skype chat discussion with strelok on how the sequence will work out. you can get a vague idea on how the animation will lead up to. 

Do note whats written here isnt set to stone and things will change as the animation develops.

fades from black into a distant shot of the gaster room door in waterfall and zooms into it.

while zooming 

Asriel: "I'm no longer a flower..." what's happening?"

Chara:

[10/6/2016 11:08:34 PM] Strelok: in glitchtale what happened is that frisk tried a genocide run, but cancelled before completing it, causing an anomaly that allowed 

an empowered chara spirit to manifest back into this world

[10/6/2016 11:08:36 PM] nch: lol D:

[10/6/2016 11:09:36 PM] nch: "but you are free to debate over what the fuck is going on in the comments section"

[10/6/2016 11:10:13 PM] Strelok: oh, I've got an idea to hint more to anomalies happening, do you remember the gaster room in waterfall?

[10/6/2016 11:10:25 PM] nch: uhhuh

[10/6/2016 11:10:33 PM] Strelok: ok, so this is my idea for an opening

[10/6/2016 11:10:56 PM] Strelok: it fades from black and shows the hallway with the mysterious white door

[10/6/2016 11:11:23 PM] nch: oo ok

[10/6/2016 11:11:56 PM] Strelok: the camera approaches slowly, as we hear a distant voice of asriel, saying, "finally, I was so tired of being a flower"

[10/6/2016 11:12:21 PM] Strelok: then the door opens, but it leads into pure darkness

[10/6/2016 11:12:55 PM] Strelok: while everything is black, we then hear "chara, are you there?"

[10/6/2016 11:13:25 PM] Strelok: chara responds "yes, here I am"

[10/6/2016 11:14:35 PM] Strelok: asriel says "h-how did you-" and chara interrupts "we are not finished here, we'll do it together now"

[10/6/2016 11:15:47 PM] Strelok: then it shows the throne room


[10/6/2016 11:37:27 PM] Strelok: wait, maybe we can simplify it even more

[10/6/2016 11:38:12 PM] Strelok: let's backtrack

[10/6/2016 11:38:26 PM] Strelok: before it shows anything, it's still back

[10/6/2016 11:38:31 PM] Strelok: we just hear some sounds

[10/6/2016 11:38:54 PM] Strelok: like some power absorbtion and asriel is heard groaning in pain

[10/6/2016 11:39:33 PM] Strelok: chara then says "there, there, it's not so bad, you just need to assimilate the power, you can handle it"

[10/6/2016 11:40:20 PM] Strelok: then it shows the throne, and all the soul canisters on the side, empty

[10/6/2016 11:40:59 PM | Edited 12:11:17 AM] Strelok: chara sits asriel on the trhone, and tells him, "now, you just wait, the power it's going to manifest soon enough"

[10/6/2016 11:41:36 PM] Strelok: then asgore steps in and tells them to stop this

[10/6/2016 11:42:01 PM] nch: ah I see

[10/6/2016 11:43:14 PM] Strelok: chara says " ha, it's too late old geezer"

[10/6/2016 11:44:09 PM | Edited 12:14:35 AM] Strelok: chara: "no one can stop it now"

[10/6/2016 11:45:32 PM] Strelok: asriel: "chara... I.. can't... hold it... it's too much..."

[10/6/2016 11:46:21 PM] Strelok: chara is looking at his arm as it begins mutating and then they say "oh... that doesn't look good"

[10/6/2016 11:47:36 PM] nch: lol

[10/6/2016 11:47:41 PM] Strelok: asriel starts going after chara just like tetsuo after the girl in akira, chara says "asriel stop!"

[10/6/2016 11:48:29 PM] Strelok: chara "asriel, don't! ahhhh!" but then asgore attacks with a fireball

[10/6/2016 11:48:53 PM] nch: lol oh yeah fireball...forgot he has that, was thinking he was about to pull out his red spear of justice

[10/6/2016 11:48:54 PM] nch: lol D:

[10/6/2016 11:49:23 PM] Strelok: he trhows one fire, and then we see he has his trident out

[10/6/2016 11:49:47 PM] nch: asriel in pain on the floor

[10/6/2016 11:49:54 PM] nch: and then the gruesome reveal

[10/6/2016 11:49:56 PM] nch: lol D:

[10/6/2016 11:50:13 PM] Strelok: heh, from there, asriel looks at asgore

[10/6/2016 11:51:06 PM] Strelok: then yells "dad! get away, I can't control it! and then the huge mass goes after asgore, who tries to fight it with his trident but gets 

overwhelmeed just like the officer in the movie

[10/6/2016 11:51:40 PM] nch: yea

[10/6/2016 11:53:19 PM] Strelok: and then bam! he is saved by frisk, who is wielding the hyperblaster that asriel uses, is similar to the laser kaneda uses

[10/6/2016 11:53:34 PM] Strelok: oh no!

[10/6/2016 11:53:36 PM] nch: lol

[10/6/2016 11:53:39 PM] Strelok: the revolver!

[10/6/2016 11:53:45 PM] nch: I was thinking the spear of undyne though

[10/6/2016 11:53:49 PM] Strelok: concentrated determination

[10/6/2016 11:54:22 PM] nch: I dunnoe how good it looks of frisk riding on greater dog with a small gun

[10/6/2016 11:54:35 PM] nch: than holding on a blue energy lance that she can keep throwing lol D:

[10/6/2016 11:54:59 PM] Strelok: but here is the thing

[10/6/2016 11:55:53 PM] Strelok: the laser or the gun would work better for the scene given what kaneda uses

[10/6/2016 11:56:09 PM] Strelok: also if they get trapped inside, to break free

[10/6/2016 11:56:35 PM] nch: probably.

[10/6/2016 11:56:42 PM] nch: well maybe asriel's hyper laser then LOL.

[10/6/2016 11:56:45 PM] nch: out of no where

[10/6/2016 11:56:47 PM] nch: its just there lol

[10/6/2016 11:57:04 PM] Strelok: or use the empty gun, it's also our chance to show how it really works

[10/6/2016 11:57:31 PM] nch: lol

[10/6/2016 11:57:42 PM] Strelok: frisk holds it up, and we see the guns starting to resonate with yellow energy flowing from frisk's arm

[10/6/2016 11:58:31 PM] nch: yea lol

[10/6/2016 11:58:34 PM] Strelok: then, they squeeze the trigger and we see a small ball of energy building up on the barrel before it goes off

[12:00:26 AM] Strelok: and then frisk can yell asriel instead of tetsuo and asriel keeps yelling chara cuz they confuse frisk since they look alike kinda 

instead of kaneda, heh

[12:00:46 AM] Strelok: and then it's just like the movie, heh

[12:00:56 AM] nch: someone needs to yell lol

[12:00:56 AM] nch: D:

[12:02:42 AM] Strelok: hm... but maybe you can have frisk being on foot, I think it's better, both for the sake of being much simplier, and not having an 

extra character for no reason.

[12:03:02 AM] nch: but the bike is iconic lol D:

[12:03:18 AM] Strelok: hm... have him get there on the boat person's cat boat, lol

[12:03:25 AM] nch: ooh

[12:03:26 AM] nch: lol D:

[12:03:30 AM] Strelok: the one that flies lol

[12:04:35 AM] Strelok: http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/undertale/images/b/ba/Cat-man_(1).gif/revision/latest?cb=20160131151533&path-prefix=es

[12:05:04 AM] nch: lol right, then thats a better subsitute

[12:05:12 AM] nch: totally forgot about that

[12:05:24 AM] Strelok: and just have frisk ride it, he just borrowed it from the boat person heh

[12:07:01 AM] nch: lol

[12:08:39 AM] Strelok: then, sans steps in we see him standing on top of a thing, just like the kid that saves kaneda from the stones, heh

[12:09:01 AM] nch: yeah

[12:09:06 AM] nch: bones maybe come out

[12:09:09 AM] nch: to shelter frisk

[12:10:07 AM] Strelok: since frisk would land right next to a wall, have a barrier of bones come from it to roof frisk from the falling debris

[12:10:14 AM] nch: yea

[12:11:16 AM] Strelok: ooh

[12:12:44 AM | Edited 12:42:54 AM] Strelok: and instead of the kid on the flying thing, maybe that can be toriel, given the officers reaction in the movie, 

it would be fitting for asgore to react that way from seeing her, heh. 

[12:13:39 AM] nch: lol

[12:14:13 AM] Strelok: ooh, or wait

[12:14:31 AM] nch: dun think toriel should be there to witness all that D: ahahahah

[12:14:32 AM] Strelok: maybe that can be toriel, who then starts praying just like they do in the movie

[12:14:41 AM] nch: lol

[12:14:58 AM] Strelok: toriel is in denial, she sees all her children, killing each other, she is not there really

[12:15:05 AM] nch: have to see how this plays out.

[12:15:41 AM] Strelok: she steps in, and she's the one praying at the canisters, doesn't say a word, she is just deeply affected inside

[12:16:05 AM] nch: probably

[12:18:40 AM] Strelok: so then, when frisk shoots their way out of the mass, asgore turns around to look at toriel, and yells, "Tori, get out of there!" and then 

he turns back at the thing, ready to strike just like the officer is about to shoot in the movie, to protect his wife. It all falls in place!

[12:19:06 AM] nch: lol indeed

[12:19:38 AM] nch: toriel and sans too

[12:19:45 AM] nch: sans be like gtfo asgore its unsafe lol

[12:20:08 AM] nch: toriiiiiiiii nooo D:

[12:22:40 AM] Strelok: oh, at the end you can see the mass recoiling from the kids and the officer after a beam of light appears as akira, in this case, 

sans appears before toriel and asgore, and spawns a big gaster blaster charging up, and toriel replacing the kids in this scene, she says, "Oh.. It's Sans"

[12:23:08 AM] Strelok: and then he fires, and it all fades to white.



[12:26:52 AM] nch: we need frisk to get consume too lol D:

[12:27:45 AM] Strelok: oh ok then, lets continue, so the fade to white happens, we see sans take asgore to safety just like the officer

[12:28:47 AM] Strelok: then, we cut back to the arena and we see the big blast slowly consuming asriel, frisk is there wanting to jump in

[12:29:29 AM] nch: sans stop frisk lol

[12:29:37 AM] nch: CANT DODGE THAT SANS, U GET PUSH AWAY

[12:30:07 AM] Strelok: heh, maybe

[12:30:12 AM] Strelok: but also saw it like this

[12:30:23 AM | Edited 1:00:36 AM] Strelok: toriel gets in the way telling him to stop just like the kid in the movie, but frisk pushes her aside, 

not as strong as the kind in the movie but enough to get through"

[12:30:45 AM] Strelok: and it happens

[12:30:52 AM] nch: probably heh

[12:31:00 AM] Strelok: so then toriel goes after them, but sans yells, at her to stop

[12:31:16 AM] nch: "asriel's my son"

[12:31:18 AM] nch: D:

[12:31:20 AM] Strelok: just like the other kids yell at the other in the movieto not go in

[12:32:27 AM] Strelok: sans yells "Stop, there's nothing you can do"

[12:32:52 AM] Strelok: toriel: "what else am I supposed to do? they are my children!"

[12:33:20 AM] Strelok: and then goes in just like the kid in the movie

[12:33:28 AM] nch: yeah

[12:33:29 AM] nch: lol

[12:33:44 AM] nch: now go condense all this chat into notepad plot points

[12:33:46 AM] nch: LOL

[12:33:55 AM] Strelok: I am on that right now, heh

[12:33:59 AM] nch: lol

[12:34:24 AM] nch: great at least we started fleshing out the adaptation

[12:34:26 AM] nch: lol

[12:34:43 AM] Strelok: so finally, we have sans standing on top of a thing, he looks at it, and says "I can't afford not to care anymore"

[12:35:14 AM] Strelok: and FINALLY, ending quote

[12:35:26 AM] Strelok: sans: "All for one"

[12:35:39 AM] Strelok: and it fades to white just like in the movie.

[12:35:42 AM] nch: yeah

[12:35:45 AM] nch: lol

[12:36:13 AM] nch: ASRIEL title comes out in the style of akira's title lol

[12:36:34 AM] Strelok: yeah, and then we have our end credits lol

[12:37:51 AM] nch: and everyone gets mind fucked and start arguing in the comments again

[12:37:55 AM] nch: trying to figure shit out

[12:37:58 AM] Strelok: Yeah!

[12:38:00 AM] nch: lol D:

[12:38:18 AM] Strelok: let them make up stories and theories, this could start a whole new alternate universe m8, lol

[12:38:24 AM] nch: lol...

[12:38:49 AM] Strelok: but yeah, sans says "all for one, it all comes full circle, the end

[12:38:58 AM] nch: anyway gtg, great progress, we finally establish a proper first draft of the adaptaion then

[12:39:08 AM] Strelok: yeah, cya man


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