THE BIG CARNIVAL CIRCUS Chapter 1 (esplanation)
Added 2023-08-29 21:44:13 +0000 UTCHi Folks,
I know that many of you feel that the start of the new series was lukewarm with no action or corruption.
But that's because I want to focus on the gradual corruption of the families that I will be featuring in the series and not just on meaningless sex scenes. So I'm going to evolve corruption little by little, with resistance, just like in the book of evil.
Of course there will be a lot of sex, but when it comes to the protagonists the sex will happen gradually.
That's why when I present a new series I always send a much larger number of pages than usual, but unfortunately I couldn't accomplish this feat with Circo.
I'm sure this series will surprise you in a very positive way. You bet.
Comments
Thanks Quinn. Things are going to get even better.
FASCINUM
2023-09-02 22:56:11 +0000 UTCWow what a great start. Lots of great potential!
Quinn
2023-09-01 18:34:41 +0000 UTCDo this next one, I know your talking about slow burn here, but to add on, could you possible have less of a super drastic transformation, I feel like the super insane transformations take me out of it a bit, and I might be in the minority here, but the more subtle transformations I think sell it a bit better, than them becoming big titted monstrosity’s lol, I think you could go a long way with just eye changes and some well placed dialogue, still amazing work! Just something to consider.
Johny
2023-08-30 19:41:40 +0000 UTC
