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BOOK OF EVIL: FINAL

Hi folks,

I received a lot of criticism regarding the end of the work: Book of Evil.

I'm willing to rewrite this ending.

But I need your help.

What did you not like about the ending?

Comments

This year, 2025, I will have news about this. 😈

FASCINUM

i agree to Michael, to random @ the end. There are a nice group of involved members, it would be nice to see more action of them. This story coulnd be end here, please thinkt about a further ongoing story, in my opinion your masterpiece. So wierd and full of crazy sex - i love it!

Horst Gas

Hi Michael! Thanks for your feedback. As the guy who was caught in bed with his friend's wife said: "I can explain!" 😁 1. When I placed other characters outside the core of the story, I wanted to demonstrate that the power of corruption had expanded to an entire city. Corruption at that time had spread. 2. The classmates did not return because they were inserted at that moment in history to fulfill the purpose of: demonstrating the power of corruption and to distract one of the protagonists for what was to come. 3. In my defense there were orgy scenes in at least 4 chapters. (Β¬β€ΏΒ¬) But I agree that sex is never too much. (Ν β‰– ΝœΚ–Ν β‰–)πŸ‘Œ Always I appreciate the participation of all of you fans. Your opinion is very important to me. I'm currently working on an epilogue where I'm going to explain certain things that were misinterpreted, cut some corners and give more substance to the story.

FASCINUM

I was a fan who did not like the ending. What I disliked was: 1. It lost focus and showcased a bunch of new, random people rather than concluding with the characters we'd been following the entire story. I wanted to see the escalation of Steve and his harem, not a bunch of randos. 2. I thought the female classmates from the middle would come back for more fun, but we never saw them again :( 3. There wasn't enough escalation of sexual acts, the last we see of Steve he was just having normal sex. I would have liked to see more intense oral sex, cosplay, face slapping, verbal humiliation, etc.

Michael

In addition to the sequel, you can also try some "training" of the mother before sister comes home, or more stories about the mother? And if I and the boy, I wouldn't let any male stay in my heaven you know lol


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