BTS - Revenge Page200 Alt Sketches
Added 2023-10-20 15:06:10 +0000 UTCSome pages come easy, some are page 200 lol
Added a little note to each page for those interested in my thought process. Some of the cut dialogue will likely be recycled into later pages so if you see it again no you didn't
Comments
good ideas, but there can only be one at the end, it's understandable, great extra pages, keep it up Annonnxyz 😄
chavitox
2023-10-20 21:32:56 +0000 UTCLoving the shots here too, and the notes! But I can see why some of this just didn't flow with the rest, and I do think the final page is the better out of all three! Though I'd love to see that bit about "What if I get too big for you?" "There's no such thing." return somewhere. Especially if Lexi's nearly ready to burst ;) And I like the thought process and design stuff! Your art remains magical, even if I see behind the curtain :D
Skellie
2023-10-20 17:13:17 +0000 UTCI personally do like the first draft a lot so hopefully a version of it can be made further down the line but the official 200 page is by far the best choice given the story is currently
AnimeJNKY
2023-10-20 15:22:27 +0000 UTCLove the notes explaining why it was scrapped and I completely understand where you are coming from.
SpaceExtra
2023-10-20 15:21:45 +0000 UTC
