Revenge Page189
Added 2023-08-17 22:36:17 +0000 UTCLex has been playing a lot of ace attorney recently
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Truthfully I don't find it a weakness. I think it was a well done way to get us to ignore the fact that this was an act of revenge. Just because it worked out in Cass's favor doesn't mean it still wasn't part of the revenge. Maybe I read too much into it, but I felt like it kind of turned the lens on the reader like "are you enjoying this story? This story of REVENGE?!" And the reader has to sit there and think to themselves "oh yeah... She absolutely removed her autonomy by cursing her with an insatiable hunger and weight gain... And ... Ruined her home life... And... School life ... Oh."
Mike
2023-08-22 07:21:51 +0000 UTCIt's a tough act to balance in fetish writing, but I really appreciate the little bonding bits you did at Cass' house, with the food and movies and all that cuteness. It was super sweet, and I liked how the main story progressed too!
Skellie
2023-08-22 06:37:55 +0000 UTCTo be honest that's more of a weakness in my writing and a side effect writing in this type of genre, things like that that would've added depth get left behind to advance the main story faster. Definitely something that I'm keeping in mind to improve for future work.
Annonnxyz
2023-08-21 10:29:44 +0000 UTCShe may be able walk there but will anyone be walking out? π
Annonnxyz
2023-08-21 10:23:00 +0000 UTCRevenge on the cheer squad sounds better.
Achernarus
2023-08-20 14:58:02 +0000 UTCAs an aside, it just kind of occurred to me that outside of making Lexi fat, Cass doesn't really seem to care too much about Lexi's interests or concerns. And I think the same could be said for Lexi as well. These two really have no common ground other than weight gain.
Mike
2023-08-18 06:20:34 +0000 UTCSooo I hope this series goes back to what it was all aboutβ¦revenge:) I hope sheβs not gonna be able to walk to prom
Rockoo
2023-08-18 01:42:25 +0000 UTCAs a confrontation-averse lad, I've been dreading this moment, and I'd honestly hoped Lexi had moved past these feelings better! But then, she's also right- Cass DID curse her, did make her gain at least an initially huge amount of weight, did cause her life to upend without really...asking. On the flip side though, without her, Lexi would still be an absolute jerk, surrounded by fake friends, controlling parents, and on top of all that- skinny as a rake. As kinda terrible as Cass was at first, she's also made Lexi a better human, found her a surrogate mom who loves her and bakes her yummy things, and has stood by her side and gone above and beyond what anyone else would have. Anger makes us say dumb things, and I hope once they cool off they can make up- it's clear Cass isn't looking for attention cause she's got her heart set on a blimping blonde, and even Stacey can see that! Anyway, damn- the guts to mix excellent boob shots with drama.
Skellie
2023-08-18 01:03:31 +0000 UTCThank you! I am so non confrontational this whole section has been the bit I've been most afraid of writing lmao
Annonnxyz
2023-08-18 00:09:55 +0000 UTCsustained
Annonnxyz
2023-08-18 00:04:02 +0000 UTCIt's alllll coming together
Annonnxyz
2023-08-18 00:03:44 +0000 UTCLook out for that dry puddle Cass:ποΈπποΈ
Bunny Cut
2023-08-17 23:41:28 +0000 UTCBut on a serious note I think both sides are valid in the way they think. Lexi has every right to be upset with Cass given the situation she put Lexi in and to be fair she could be feeling desperate since Prom is a big thing to her. Cass understandably is concerned since the timing of this βdateβ and way the cheer squad is acting. But this is def top tier writing/story telling!
SpaceExtra
2023-08-17 23:21:53 +0000 UTCObjection. Bribing the judge with fried chicken.
SpaceExtra
2023-08-17 23:12:41 +0000 UTCIβve actually been waiting for this confrontation to finally happen because no matter what happens next one thing is certain, thereβs going to be a LOT of fatties in the future of this comic π
AnimeJNKY
2023-08-17 23:07:40 +0000 UTCπ π«΅
Annonnxyz
2023-08-17 22:52:59 +0000 UTCThat is a lot to unpack... I mean I agree they are both right. But I also think that those two need to dig through all of these feelings if they even want to remain friends, let alone anything further. It's easy to be friends when things are going well, much more difficult when things aren't great...
Mike
2023-08-17 22:51:07 +0000 UTCBoth sides have a point here. Lexi is right in Cass wrecking her life and not accepting that a man could find her beautiful and perhaps envious that someone finds her attractive. Cass in saying that this is obviously a prank, especially coming soon after the cheerleaders insulted Lexi and Cass.
hypershock18
2023-08-17 22:40:20 +0000 UTCOBJECTION!!!
WFT21
2023-08-17 22:37:35 +0000 UTC
