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bookstore cover

Please leave your feedback in the comments if you think something should be fixed, added, or changed. This is the cover for bookstores. Thanks everyone!

bookstore cover

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I loved watching as you built it and played with layering... I love how flat the other characters are and how their colors recede, forcing the attention on the two in the middle. My only edit would be to reposition or color push back the sword and arm in the top right, I think it competes with the center character’s pop

Ryan Moore

Thank you everyone this is really helpful!!

Michelle Fus

I LOVE all the details and each characters unique symbolism surrounding them. The only thing that my eyes catch is how much blue there is in this. It makes everyone besides Ava and Wrathia kind of flat in comparison, due to the contrast. When I look at the image with just Odin, Ava, and Maggie it seems more balanced. Maybe Six needs a more grayish color? Like sterile metallic shades, if that makes any sense... Other than that (and it might just be my eyeballs, who knows!) it is perfect!

thepiefairy

Wonderful cover!! but...maybe Ava’s face is overdetailed compared to the rest of the characters¿¿¿?

Fantazyne

It's amazing! Maybe Gil's background should be a little darker, so he pops out more:)

Designpill

The key is a little hard to make out but other than that it’s gorgeous

Eve

No, I think this looks great and in pulp/space opera spirit. We see many of the importent characters, a villain and get a hint, here and there of what awaits in this books pages.

Martin

Looks great! Wonder if it will have a gloss or matte finish?

DinoBit16

Your work is really amazing, as always ! For me the only thing (I'm sorry, this is quite nitpicky) is the key, I would have made it more bright so it stand out more. In any case, keep up the great work !

Vacilys Yuradle

IT LOOKS AMAZIZNG

Lady of Monsters

I absolutely love this! It's amazing! I honestly can't think of a way to improve it.

Conner K

I'm struggling to come up with any feedback... it's honestly a wonderful compilation illustration. Let me step into my art student shoes... I do think Wrathia's smile looks a little too narrow/tight horizontally given how big of a smile it is, but it does help her look horrifying/manic/bloodthirsty (which... she is, lol). Also if I'm really, REALLY reaching for something to crit, Wrathia's hands feel pretty obviously mirrored. IDK if that matters or not, just something I noticed since they really draw the eye. I know hands are a bitch... I probably just have something against Wrathia, lmao. Thank you for sharing with us!! Absolutely beautiful work.

D. Alfonso

The illustration is beautiful. Although the characters would pop more if the frame was darker or was more of a neutral color.

It's wonderful!! I think it captures every character perfectly!

Jules

It looks amazing! I love seeing all the main characters on the front cover.

Eden Predawn

It's gorgeous! 👋 new here btw, I decided to support because I really want to see more of this book & I'm in love with the art, it is so vibrant and beautiful 💖

Emicontained

Beautiful as always Michelle.

Scrub Jay

It looks amazing! With just the right amount of details I think! ^o^

Arsha

Absolutely perfect!

Paisley Dodge


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