Beyond Worlds: Mis-Taken Hero Ch. 09
Added 2024-12-01 05:28:59 +0000 UTCWoot!
Gonna be real... I'm not sure I like how this one ended.
Let me know your thoughts below or in the Discussion Chat.
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Well, that was great! Now the ever-present problem: waiting for the next one ;-;
Gemini_Storm8
2024-12-01 15:52:39 +0000 UTCThe "I" is actually a Grammarly issue. It tried to change every instance of Li into I. I must have hit Accept instead of Dismiss on one. I'm seriously considering retconning her name and changing every instance of Li to Lin just so my editing software will stop whining at me. The first Hero-kin is the correct one, I'm not sure what happened to the second because I didn't write it like that, although I do remember leaving the H lowercase and thinking I would need to come back and fix that. I know I've mentioned this numerous times before, but these types of comments should be made in a Direct Message, not here. This area is for discussing the content of the chapter, not nitpicking because I missed a couple of things when editing.
BluDraygn
2024-12-01 06:32:24 +0000 UTCzingowner
2024-12-01 06:23:28 +0000 UTC
