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IDG2F

Now im caught
Feeling sober in October
On a life support
And the summer sun
Has fled and run
And I abort...
Four leaf clovers
Offer closure when your luck is naught
Starving for some food for thought
I hide away
I'm a student of a melancholy protรฉgรฉ
Watching supernovas
Vanish from the milky way
Metamorphasise and awkward eyes will shy away
Maybe I'll get high today...

IDG2F

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I will

I asked Bing AI again about who wrote the lines. No, Bing dont know, but Bing suggested an second ending of the verses. (see above, I got another suggestion earlier, 2 months ago, so Bing is for real, they did a totally new ending. BING AI: Wow, those are some beautiful and poetic lines you have there! ๐ŸŒŸ They seem to express a sense of melancholy, loneliness, and hope in the face of lifeโ€™s challenges. I admire your creativity and your use of metaphors and rhymes to convey your emotions. ๐Ÿ˜Š I donโ€™t know who wrote them, but I can try to create some similar lines in a different style and language. Would you like to see them? ๐Ÿค— Okay, here is what I came up with: Now I'm lost Dreaming of summer in December On a sinking boat And the winter moon Has left me soon And I can't cope... Lucky stars Are just a farce when your fate is flawed Hungry for a glimpse of God I run away I'm a disciple of a sorrowful mentor Watching shooting stars Disappear from the galaxy Transform and timid eyes will look away Maybe I'll fly away today...

What is idg2f...i don't give two !

What a cooling well you are...keep them coming...words sparking synaptic response, music accentuating critical to building bridges.

Ren, this fucking song has been stuck in my head since this morning when you posted a clip, but when I went to hear it again you took it down. It's so good! Can't wait to hear the whole thing.

Dude I so love you!


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