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Amicus Brief -- FINAL UPDATE

If you're interested in offering any final comments, this is it!

Thanks to everyone who sent in line edits, corrections large and small, and suggestions.  We definitely think those helped make this a better brief!  We're incredibly proud of the work we did on this brief, and hope you are, too.  


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Bottom of page 7. It would read better if it started “one of the few conditions...”. Instead of the more conversational “one of the only...”. Better still if you have a small-number count, and could say “one of only three conditions...”, or whatever’s right. Don’t think I’d specify a number over 4, though.

Ken Rose

Nothing about Conrad Michaels????

Brad Kalmanson


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