Smoking Hypnosis Season 2 EP.13 & Jane's husband story
Added 2025-09-04 11:30:00 +0000 UTCHello dear subscribers! Episode 13 has been released! As I mentioned before, this episode mainly focuses on Kate’s fight against the police officers, and her showdown with Jane. For those of you who wanted something more erotic, I’ve also prepared a side story with illustrations. It’s about Jane and her husband, taking place right after Episode 11. The husband begins to feel uneasy about Jane’s behavior, even suspecting that the prostitute who assaulted him might actually have been her. Jane toys with him and slowly begins to break him in. Originally, I planned to release this novel together with Episode 12, but I was stuck for nearly a month without inspiration. I hope you enjoy it. The WIP for Episode 14 will be released on the 13th on Fanbox and Fantia. Thank you, as always! 亲爱的订阅者们，大家好！ 第13话已经公开了！ 正如我之前所说，本集的重点是知敏与警察们的战斗，以及她与廷雅的对决。 为了满足想看更情色场面的读者们，我特别制作了一个插曲小说和插画。故事讲述的是廷雅与丈夫之间的情节，发生在第11话之后。丈夫开始对廷雅的行为产生违和感，甚至怀疑那个殴打过自己的妓女就是她本人。而廷雅则一边戏弄他，一边逐渐开始驯服他。 原本这篇小说打算和第12话一起发布，但因为灵感迟迟没有到来，被卡了一个月。希望大家喜欢。 第14话的WIP将于13日在Fanbox和Fantia公开。 一如既往地感谢大家！ 구독자 여러분 안녕하세요! 13화가 공개되었습니다! 저번에 말씀드렸듯이, 이번 편은 지민과 경찰관들의 격투 장면, 그리고 정아와의 대결이 메인 테마입니다. 에로틱한 장면을 원하시는 분들을 위해 막간을 활용하여 소설과 삽화를 제작했습니다. 정아와 남편에 관한 이야기로, 11화 직후 벌어진 이야기입니다. 남편은 정아의 행동에 위화감을 느끼며, 자신을 폭행한 창녀가 정아가 아닌가 의심합니다. 정아는 그런 남편을 희롱하며 그를 서서히 길들이기 시작합니다. 원래는 12화와 함께 올리려고 했던 소설인데, 글에 대한 영감이 떠오르지 않아 한 달 동안 막혀 있었습니다. 부디 재밌게 봐주셨으면 좋겠네요. 14화 WIP은 13일 Fanbox, Fantia에 공개될 예정입니다. 언제나 감사합니다! 購読者の皆さん、こんにちは！ 第13話が公開されました！ 以前お伝えしたとおり、今回のエピソードは花蓮と警官たちの戦闘、そして菫との対決がメインテーマとなっています。 エロティックなシーンをご希望の方のために、幕間を利用した小説と挿絵も用意しました。内容は菫と彼女の夫についてで、第11話直後に起こった出来事です。夫は菫の行動に違和感を覚え、自分を暴行した娼婦が実は菫ではないかと疑います。菫はそんな夫をからかいながら、少しずつ調教し始めます。 本来は第12話と一緒に公開する予定だった小説ですが、文章のインスピレーションが湧かず、1か月ほど手が止まっていました。楽しんでいただけたら嬉しいです。 第14話のWIPは13日にFanboxとFantiaで公開予定です。 いつも本当にありがとうございます！ ※ Tenemos buenas noticias para nuestros lectores de habla hispana. A partir de ahora, también subiremos una versión en español. Hemos actualizado el episodio 12 con una nueva versión en español, así que no duden en revisarla. ¡Agradecemos a gabrielLM180 por su ayuda con la traducción. ------------------------- S2 EP.12 Download link-------------------------- 1. Google Drive https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1nuaCCWBVbVNrIUOZYPJM69AyN07hMhoV?usp=drive_link
Comments
That's cool too! Thanks for taking care of these fetishes. I think these will fit the "fallen" theme so well! Always support!
Sebby L
2025-09-22 05:17:49 +0000 UTCUnfortunately, it doesn't appear in the preview. It appears in the latter half.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-22 04:57:29 +0000 UTCYo!!! Will it be in the preview? I'm so looking forward to seeing that.
Sebby L
2025-09-21 21:56:46 +0000 UTCYou'll see this in episode 14.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-21 05:15:26 +0000 UTCFrom the latest novel, Jane's armpit smell is the hottest in my point of view. Would really love to see her stinky pantyhose feet being licked. You mentioned that she's usually paying attention to cleaning her body. Maybe show that she intentionally let her pantyhose feet get sweaty and steamy, making her slave dying to lick.
Sebby L
2025-09-20 04:29:47 +0000 UTCAn end might be a new begin, maybe a S3? Maybe the cartel has we know (Alex ) might fall. And at S4/S5 end as you promised. Other complottistic idea, Carter is the cartel 🤣🤣🤣
ggggggggggggggg
2025-09-12 12:18:02 +0000 UTCThanks now I ve a iper hype
ggggggggggggggg
2025-09-12 12:14:13 +0000 UTCThat said, if I change the ending I promised readers, many people will be disappointed.😢
Dr. Stein
2025-09-12 07:54:51 +0000 UTC1. The location has changed from May's lab to an apartment. 2. This will be confirmed on the 23rd.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-12 07:53:23 +0000 UTC14话有很多关于脚趾恋物癖的描写. 因为有吮吸脚趾的场景,所以对喜欢这种展开的人来说,这应该是一个相当令人满意的剧集.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-12 07:52:26 +0000 UTCEntendido. Tengo un archivo Excel con esta información organizada que subiré más tarde.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-12 07:50:33 +0000 UTC네. 다음 화부터 서연의 비중이 확 늘어날 예정입니다!
Dr. Stein
2025-09-12 07:49:28 +0000 UTC격려해주셔서 감사합니다!ㅠ
Dr. Stein
2025-09-12 07:49:04 +0000 UTC我从来没有想过那种情节发展，但我认为这是一个相当不错的设置。 下次有机会的话，想利用一下。
Dr. Stein
2025-09-12 07:48:50 +0000 UTCAuthor said that Kate will go to Mei's lab, but for now, has Mei been fallen too? Or will Mei fall when she's helping Kate?
nangga
2025-09-11 10:05:09 +0000 UTC一直非常喜欢你的作品，人物心理和外观塑造都非常具体，堕落细节也刻画的非常细腻.不过我觉得在你的作品中，还是比较多的注重展现上身而非全身或者是脚步，角色的鞋也比较少露脚趾的细跟高跟鞋，其实这也是非常多观众喜欢看的一部分，会非常有效果，也希望作者你能给予多一点这些画面和鞋子，非常感谢
yamakomoe
2025-09-09 16:36:07 +0000 UTC시즌2에선 서연이의비중이 많이 없어졌군요 이제부터라도 나올 가능성이 있을까요?
hansol Jang
2025-09-09 10:53:07 +0000 UTCTu universo ha crecido mucho con todo el personal de la policía, lo cual es genial. Sin embargo, últimamente me ha costado trabajo identificar algunos nombres de personajes que mencionas, ya sea porque a veces no los recuerdo y otras porque los nombres se intercambian entre traducciones ¿Podrías hacer una lista rápida de todos los personajes que has creado con sus nombres en diferentes idiomas y también su pronunciación en inglés porque muchos no entendemos el coreano o el japonés?
Nobody
2025-09-09 07:21:10 +0000 UTCWell you are the mind, you can change the prologue as soon is not published
ggggggggggggggg
2025-09-09 01:52:44 +0000 UTCMaybe even more than a couple 🥹🥹🥹
ggggggggggggggg
2025-09-09 01:50:09 +0000 UTC항상 재밌게 보고 있습니다. 건강 잘 챙기시면서 활동해주세요!
헤구
2025-09-08 10:35:25 +0000 UTC作者有没有考虑过，通过仪器改变性器官的形状的剧情，身体被改造导致女主每天都自慰，越来越渴望得到性爱，最后成瘾戒不掉，投身黑暗，哪怕是被伙伴用仪器救回来了身体也控制不住欲望最后重新堕落，变得更邪恶更淫荡😈
dandycd
2025-09-08 06:47:58 +0000 UTC嗅觉癖的部分想想就刺激，有一种毒药上瘾的感觉😁
dandycd
2025-09-08 06:40:08 +0000 UTC好喜欢这种自己不知不觉慢慢的改变思想观念的剧情，当知敏发现不对劲的时候，已经无法回头了😈
dandycd
2025-09-08 06:39:28 +0000 UTC她是这世界观中最强大的，哈哈！
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 06:01:31 +0000 UTC감사합니다ㅎㅎ 다음 화에도 냄새 페티쉬와 관련된 장면이 등장할 예정이니 많이 기대해주세요!
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 06:01:07 +0000 UTC아... 듣고 보니 그것도 괜찮았을 거 같네요. 괜찮은 아이디어인데 구현하지 못한 게 뒤늦게 아쉽군요ㅠ
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 06:00:41 +0000 UTCThank you very much! There are currently no plans for lesbian scenes between Kate and Jane, but since many people want to see them, I’m considering including a brief moment or two. As for Jane having sex with other men, those scenes will appear later. She will subtly show them to her husband to provoke his jealousy.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:58:53 +0000 UTC我非常理解并真诚接受您的意见。 之所以会出现这种情况，主要是因为第二季的结构是多位女主角接连堕落，因此我更注重了整体故事的推进，而不是单独聚焦在某一个角色的堕落上。大的叙事框架其实就是智敏的彻底堕落，可以说到目前为止的一切都是为了她的崩塌所做的铺垫。 我可以明确告诉您，从第14话中段开始，就会进入您们期待的展开。警局已经陷落，所有角色都走向堕落，因此所有的铺垫都已结束。接下来将会只专注于智敏的堕落。您所期待的警局的堕落日常也会出现，性爱场面也会有很多。 让等待许久的读者们失望，我感到非常抱歉。尤其是第13话，我思考的时间比以往都要长。 但接下来就是直线的展开，只剩下朝着大家期待的终点奔去，请拭目以待吧！
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:55:54 +0000 UTC너무 감사합니다ㅠㅠ 그 말씀을 들으니 예전에 '몸에 좋은 남자' 작가님이 하셨던 말씀이 생각나네요. 액션 장면과 섹스 장면의 본질은 같다고요. 그 말이 굉장히 인상 깊어서, '나도 성인웹툰을 잘 그릴 수 있지 않을까' 용기를 얻었던 기억이 납니다.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:36:06 +0000 UTCI'm truly delighted by your praise! Every time I receive such compliments, it makes me want to work even harder. Part of me doesn't want to see Carter's downfall either. I never felt that way before, but as the story unfolds, I've started to empathize with him a little. Still, I suppose I'll ultimately witness his tragic end.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:33:50 +0000 UTCSí. Le lavarán el cerebro utilizando métodos más técnicos.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:30:28 +0000 UTCHaha, of course. Her story isn't over yet. Once Kate's story is finished, I plan to wrap up Jane's story.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:29:43 +0000 UTC감사합니다! 사실 이번 화는 섹스 씬이 전혀 없어서 독자분들이 안좋아하시면 어쩌나 고민이 깊었는데, 이렇게 좋은 평을 해주시는 분들이 많아 정말 감사하고 있습니다. 네. 저는 지민이 수동적으로 함락당하기 보단, 능동적으로 악의 길로 빠져드는 걸 더 선호합니다. 지민은 평소 불쾌하게 생각했던 음탕한 옷들에 호기심을 느끼고, 아무데서나 난잡하게 섹스하는 사람들을 보며 묘한 흥분감에 젖을 거에요.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:23:09 +0000 UTCAs for Maladea’s original plant form, yes, it does have pheromones. Originally, it was researched as a way to interfere with stray cats’ pheromones to prevent them from breeding. But that research never succeeded, and eventually the lab was shut down due to lack of funding. Some of the researchers then joined hands with the cartel to continue the project—though with a completely different goal. The cartel wanted to transform those pheromones from affecting cats to manipulating the minds of humans.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:17:46 +0000 UTCThank you so much for the kind words! To answer your question—Kate will not be brainwashed in the same way as the other heroines. She has the mental strength to resist Maladea, so it’s impossible to enslave her through the flowers. Interestingly, quite a few readers seem to want to see a heroine’s rebellion. Maybe that’s because Alex is such an unappealing and ruthless character. Haha! But I don’t intend to give that role to Kate. If such a rebellion were to happen, I believe the one to lead it would be Rin—since she’s the only character who still holds true free will.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 05:17:41 +0000 UTCJane thought Kate would be neutralized quickly once she got addicted to the pheromones, just like the other officers. She didn’t expect Kate to take down several well-known strong officers in the precinct so easily, nor to dodge a gunshot in an instant. As for Dalia, she actually entered the office a bit late and only then pulled out her gun (since in Episode 12, Dalia wasn’t in the office). I guess I didn’t direct that part very clearly, so it makes sense you felt that way. Anyway, I fully accept your points—since that scene may indeed have felt a bit forced. I’ll make sure to build a stronger and more solid story next time!
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:55:39 +0000 UTCありがとうございます。今回はエロティックなシーンが少ないので、菫には色気担当を務めてもらいました。ハハ！
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:47:10 +0000 UTC헉... 그렇겠네요ㅎㅎㅎ 그 생각은 안 해봤는데...ㅠ 혹시라도 애니화 시킨다면 애니메이팅 하시는 분께 돈을 많이 드려야겠습니다ㅎㅎ
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:44:38 +0000 UTC네ㅎㅎ 여유가 있으면 쓰고 싶은 소설들이 많습니다. 지민과 정아가 처음 만났던 이야기, 다은이 타락하게 된 과정, 윤세리와 동식의 이야기 등등...
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:43:41 +0000 UTCThat's right. The only places she can go are May's lab or her home. There, Kate will be plotting her counterattack.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:42:25 +0000 UTC감사합니다! 에로틱 씬이 없어서 호불호가 크게 갈리지 않을까 걱정이 많았는데, 좋게 평가해주시는 분들이 많아 너무 감사하고 있습니다. 트이나리 님도 환절기 건강 조심하세요!
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:41:00 +0000 UTCThank you very much! I tried my best to show her overwhelming self. From now on, I'll be covering the process of her slow decline—she who was once so overwhelmingly dominant.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:37:42 +0000 UTCはい、その部分も詳しく描く予定です！ 菫と大地が直接出会うことはなさそうですが、もし菫が大地を誘惑したら、大地もきっと耐えるのは難しいでしょうね。ハハ！
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:34:51 +0000 UTCThanks a lot!
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:32:47 +0000 UTC是的 正雅现在要正式开始纹身和染发了 丈夫对静雅的变化感到抵触情绪，但另一方面却很着迷。
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:32:27 +0000 UTCThank you so much for looking so carefully at each scene I drew. You’re right. The scenes you mentioned are also the ones I personally felt a bit unsatisfied with after finishing. In the first scene, there really should have been an extra frame linking the moment Kate blocks with her baton and then kicks with her opposite leg, but I had to skip it because I was pressed for time. As for the second scene, I wanted to portray Kate’s composure, so I drew her in that pose, but as you said, a superhero stance might indeed have worked better. Even though these are silent panels that readers could easily skim through, it makes me really happy that you examined them so attentively.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:31:03 +0000 UTCYes. I thought about whether to draw that part in a comics or a novel, but I finally chose the latter. I'm going to draw Jane's future story in a comics.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:23:28 +0000 UTCありがとうございました！とても念入りに描いたのですが、喜んでいただけてとてもうれしいです！
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:21:39 +0000 UTCI'm thinking of writing it from time to time in the future!
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:20:08 +0000 UTC보통 지민처럼 강한 에고를 가진 히로인은 강압적인 조교로 타락시키는 전개가 많지만, 지민의 경우는 조금 다를 거에요. 강압이 없는 건 아니나, 그녀의 내면에서 동화가 일어나도록 유도하는 방향에 더 가까울 거 같습니다. 경찰서는 정아가 몰락하기 전부터 이미 전원 타락한 상태였습니다. 일부 부서 경찰관들이 멀쩡한 상태였다면, 경찰서 장악은 어려웠을 테니까요. 물론 그렇게 되기까지 시간 차는 있습니다.
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:19:19 +0000 UTC谢谢！以后也会努力给大家展现伏笔扎实的故事！
Dr. Stein
2025-09-08 04:12:10 +0000 UTC李志敏简直就是个超人😍
埃提乌斯
2025-09-06 23:27:19 +0000 UTC작가님 오늘도 너무 잘 감사했습니다 ㅎㅎ 소설까지 정말 너무 좋네요! ㅎㅎ 냄새 묘사가 너무 제 취향이라 앞으로도 가능하신 선에선 많이 표현해주셨음 좋겠습니다 ㅎㅎ 항상 건강하세요!
뿡뿡이
2025-09-06 12:31:39 +0000 UTC작품 잘 봤습니다. 다음 작품도 기대가 되는데요. 개인적인 의견으로는 싸우는 장면 대신 세뇌가 아직 되지않은 동료가 지민을 탈출시키고, 그 동료가 결국 세뇌되어 지민을 찾는 장면도 괜찮지 않았을까 싶네요. 어쨌든 다음장면 굉장히 기대되고 잘챙겨보겠습니다
geese1950
2025-09-06 03:55:07 +0000 UTCI would love to see these extra hookups Jane mentioned, especially if they involve her having sex with multiple guys at the same time. Other than that very nice fight scenes, Kate is a killing machine hahaha. I didn't expect her to escape in the end. I can't imagine how her corruption will start but I am enjoying the slow burn. Will her and Jane have any lesbian scenes in the future? It would be great if Jane dominated her in a lesbian scene to make up for getting hit in the face
Udong
2025-09-05 12:44:19 +0000 UTC전투씬이든, 섹스씬이든, 모두 몸을 움직이는 액션이라는 공통된 요소가 있어서 그런지, 종류는 다르지만 흥분되고 재밌게 봤습니다! 섹스씬 없어도 이런 액션씬, 개인적으로는 정말 대환영입니다!
devil white
2025-09-05 11:10:08 +0000 UTC我订阅了半年多了，我认为目前系列的问题是您过于注重剧情了，该有的腐化堕落色情完全没展现全，首先大部分订阅者其实是冲着腐化色情部分来的这毫无疑问，新的篇章实在是在剧情上着墨太多，失去了应有的吸引力，像是廷雅的番外线上约炮我认为就完全可以画出来，而不是仅仅作为文字，以及我相信警局女警腐化是非常非常多订阅者想看的，比如她们在腐化后的日常生活约炮、卖淫，这才是大家想看到的，目前有点乏味了
尘 曦
2025-09-05 05:46:52 +0000 UTCI wanted to wait till this issue was out to express my admiration for your work. Very well done. Love where this is going and to see how this chapter ended was nice. As much as I don't want to see Kate fall, I like where you went with this season 2. I really like Kate's as the main character yet she'll fall eventually, poor Carter. Hope he get some kind of justice. A scene I can't wait to see him and a corrupted Kate.
qarlf
2025-09-05 04:53:14 +0000 UTCMe encantaría que el lavado cerebral de Kate sea estilo mia , que se juegue con su mente incluso con el uso de tecnología
Diekki
2025-09-05 02:46:44 +0000 UTCMore Jane content please!!!!
Poomandhu
2025-09-04 20:11:33 +0000 UTC격투가 저항하는 캐릭터성격을 부각해줬고 그로인해 타락의 기대치가 상승하는 효과가 생겼네요. 즉 캐릭터가 더 빛이나고 생명력이 느껴져서 몰입도가 올라갔어요. 그런 의미에서 세뇌로 당하는 서사도 좋지만. 저항하다 함정이나 우연히 어떤 경험하고 좌절하다가 나중엔 호기심이 폭발해서 스스로 능동화되며 타락하는 모습도 꽤 흥분도가 좋을것같단 생각이듭니다. 그게 저항이 강할수록 또는 쾌락을 이해할수없음이 높을수록 캐릭터에 타락기대치가 엄청 올라가더군요. 모르니 알고싶고 그들을 이해할수없으니 호기심을 갖다가 확인하고 나중엔 좋아서 스스로 시도해봅니다. 흡연하고,노출하며 그러면서 미용실이나, 타투,피어싱가게에 방문하는 장면만으로도 캐릭터에 흥분도가 엄청 올라갑니다. 용감하게 저항하며 탈출한 격투신장면이 매우 인상깊게 각인된것같습니다. 다음편이 기대되네요. 수고하셨습니다.
wkdbwkdb114
2025-09-04 19:39:16 +0000 UTCThird, is it possible that someone like Kate, with her resistance to the drug (Meladea), will have a different brainwashing process than the others? For example, it won't just take longer to break her, but the outcome could be different. Her morals might get twisted such that she now embraces lewdness and believes (depending on the brainwashing suggestions) that the only righteous world is one where women give in to their primal desires, free from morality and shame—but with a twist: Kate keeps her free will. So she changes into a villainess that could rival Alex, especially with Mei on her side she could even be more dangerous than him. Fourth, you wrote in Episode 5 (Season 2) that they modified a plant into Maladea. But did the original plant already have a similar effect, which they then advanced into the drug/plant we know or could they have made Maladea with any plant?
Ruz
2025-09-04 19:37:25 +0000 UTCHellooooo, really great work as usual your art style is 'a picture for the gods'. I haven't seen anything similar. First, I really like the new uniforms from episode 12. That you went with a dress code that allows for variety in different pantyhose, etc., is great. Second, I didn't expect Kate to just dominate multiple police officers—she really is a sexy beast. Now, with her trying to escape, I'm really excited to see if she succeeds, whether the people she tries to reach for help are still on her side or not, etc.
Ruz
2025-09-04 19:37:13 +0000 UTCAmazing new Episode and the Fight Scenes looking awesome..but...the ending feels kinda...strange..i mean it´s not bad...it´s more...Jane know Kate very well for sure and she said in the last episode she is gonna prepare a good welcome...but it seems a to easy escape for her...even as she took the fight in her own hands, it was more like she wanted to get hit by Kate and that she is gonna escape (cause....why Dalia shooted so late?) With that Move Jane got even more points against Kate :O
DesiLu
2025-09-04 18:22:34 +0000 UTC13話の更新ありがとうございます。 戦闘シーンがメインとは言いつつも、悪女に堕ちた菫の表情がすごく良すぎて、とてと満足度が高いです。 これから菫が花蓮をどのように追い詰めていくか、楽しみです。 引き続き、応援しています！
hyuha
2025-09-04 18:06:46 +0000 UTC既然廷雅已经给丈夫洗脳了，那么是不是接下来可以给廷雅安排纹身了🤤
dandycd
2025-09-04 17:29:23 +0000 UTC이거 애니화 되면 애니메이션 하시는분 죽겠네
yugiho
2025-09-04 15:18:21 +0000 UTC소설은 간간히라도 이어서 계속 써주시나요??
ㅋㅅㅋ
2025-09-04 15:18:09 +0000 UTCGreat angles in the fight scenes! Kate is so sexy fighting! Now I'm excited to see the WIP on September 13 to see how far Kate goes, or where she goes! Maybe she reach's Mei's laboratory? Can't wait to see what comes next! Great work as usual!
Lestatos Lestat
2025-09-04 13:46:05 +0000 UTC와.. 결국 탈출에 성공할 줄이야.. 예측불허의 전개에 뒷내용이 더욱더 궁금하고 기대됩니다. 정의감 넘치고 강한 여캐 지민의 매력이 돋보이는 한화가 아니었나 싶습니다. 그럴수록 대비되는 후의 모습이 기대만발입니다 ㅎㅎ 이번에도 정말 즐감했습니다! 항상 건강하시고 계속 좋은 작품활동되시길 바라겠습니다~
트이나리
2025-09-04 13:28:50 +0000 UTCThe Fight scenes are Incredible in this chapter. and KATE IS SOOO COOL. omg Beautiful and strong and agile, what an absolute babe. ❤️🔥
CaptainOfNumeno
2025-09-04 13:10:26 +0000 UTCいやー小説も最高でした。 菫様にあんな誘惑されたら、佳奈の元彼も落ちますね、そしたら花蓮も必ず落ちますね。 描写は花蓮の弟を堕とすのをねっとり書いて欲しいですが🥺 とにかく最高です👍菫様〜♡
a-u
2025-09-04 13:07:42 +0000 UTCOh hell yeah. Awesome work as always Dr. Stein!! 😍😋
CaptainOfNumeno
2025-09-04 13:06:28 +0000 UTC小说太棒了，这种强制改变丈夫常识的洗脳方式，可以让廷雅名正言顺的做坏事了，期待调教丈夫的画面🤩
dandycd
2025-09-04 13:05:43 +0000 UTCWell certainly nice to have a little surprise with today's update. A fitting way for Jane to alter her husband to fit her new needs! And the update. Excellent job with Kate and the fight scene as a whole. It's really hard to show movement across panels and I think you did an incredible job for most of them. I will say that Panel 9(?) has her catching the baton with what looks like her left foot and the next panel is her kicking with her right and it doesn't click together properly. I wouldn't worry since it's a porn comic and in an update with a lot of movement not usually done in the comic having only one scene like that is fine. Panel 11 doesn't have anything wrong but maybe after bicycle kicking the guy and surrounded by bodies she should have been doing the superhero pose and rise while telling her juniors to back off. Minor critiques though for an otherwise excellent job outside of your comfort zone. Something to be proud of and I look forward to the next chapter!
The_Stork
2025-09-04 12:59:10 +0000 UTCSo far she on the run lets see how far she gets . Still I hate that eventually she will fall to lust. Nice on the Jane side story explains what happen after Jane beat her husband.
SANTORYU1989
2025-09-04 12:55:08 +0000 UTC戦闘描写も見応えと迫力があって 凄く良かったです！ この先花蓮はどうなるのか、そして菫はどんな手を打つのか… 14話以降も楽しみにしてます そして引き続き健康にはお気をつけて!
kazunko
2025-09-04 12:20:42 +0000 UTCits so good when you do light novels like this.
Pornhwa
2025-09-04 12:17:10 +0000 UTC특정 부서만 중독되서 타락한 줄 알았는데 경찰서 전원이 타락했군요? 하기사 남편 조교한 여왕님 정아의 실력이면 그정도 수완은 있을 법하니... 예상 외로 지민이 탈출하긴 했어도 어쨌거나 곧있으면 지민도 타락의 길로 접어들 것 같은데, 어떤 방식으로 타락할 지 궁금하네요. 다른 댓글에 답글로 다신 걸 보니 호기심에 서서히 동화된다고 하셨는데 솔직히 지민은 시즌2의 여주인공 포지션이고, 윤세리처럼 멜라데아에 면역이 있어 끝까지 저항했다는 경관도 있었다는 묘사와 경찰서에 들어온 지민이 전혀 흔들림없다는 표현도 있어서 강인하고 정직한 여주인공이 강압적인 쾌락 주입 끝에 타락하는 클리셰처럼 타락하거나 강인하다는 성격을 비틀어서 이성은 어떻게든 버티지만 육체의 쾌락과 그 갈증을 이기지 못하고 김용 일당과 협상하며 쾌락을 달래는 입으로만 정의를 외치게 되는 모순적인 인물, 아니면 상식개변 당해서 기행을 벌여도 본인은 눈치채지 못해 정아나 경찰들에게 비웃음 당하는 쪽으로 그려질 줄 알았는데.... 호기심이라.... 지민이가 너무 완강히 저항해서 앞으로 어떻게 전개될 지 궁금해지네요. 좋은 작품 매번 감사합니다!
gh di
2025-09-04 12:12:30 +0000 UTC铺垫太棒了，越来越期待这么强的知敏被洗脑后的模样
骱丶
2025-09-04 12:01:40 +0000 UTC🥰
john
2025-09-04 12:00:09 +0000 UTC一上传就立即识别问题并完成了修改。 对不起！
Dr. Stein
2025-09-04 11:50:37 +0000 UTC修改了。 在添加静雅腰带的过程中，文件上传错了。 不好意思。
Dr. Stein
2025-09-04 11:50:10 +0000 UTC中文版有一段没有翻译，希望修复下
john
2025-09-04 11:43:38 +0000 UTC部分图片是韩文
dddddd
2025-09-04 11:39:11 +0000 UTC中文版的好像还是韩文
dddddd
2025-09-04 11:38:25 +0000 UTC来了
john
2025-09-04 11:31:09 +0000 UTC
