Like I said in the first post, any feedback on this is appreciated. I'm not entirely sure where else to go with this. Not sure whether to just jump straight to the next animation to make up for it or keep try something else entirely.
I'll be adding sound later on, I just want feedback for now.
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UPDATE 24/08
I went back to the drawing board, came up with a new idea, and spent most of my weekend animating and rendering it to get it to you guys and gals.
It's much longer and hopefully more up to par!
This will be the version I'm going with. I'll be adding sound to it when I get the time to do so. In the meantime, I can put on other renders that you guys and gals have requested!
Have a great Monday!