Give me some feedback on the dialogue~
Look at my art, I've gotten a lot better doing this comic <3
More soon, I'll try to be uploading them consistently as I plow through linework/dialogue.
Comments
The art is spot on! Shading and expressions are really detailed so I wouldn't worry about it, that said the 2nd panel probably could just used one head imo. The dialogue is great too, I cannot wait for this chapter!