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A Storm's Lullaby Page 151

Food for thought for Lullaby.

A Storm's Lullaby Page 151

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Yep^^ "There are pones worse than me, so your criticism of my character is invalid. Now shut up or I curb stomp ya" Oh Rusty, ever the shining beacon of self reflection^^.

„I’m not a bully, because I’ve been bullied myself and had it far worse.” That’s some great mental gymnastics you’re doing Rusty.

NTG

Both observations are right!

Check is fine, it's rural.

"He kept me in check" is a bit too on the nose imo, how about "He kept me out of trouble" ?

Lulu looks like she's about to get angry in one part, but then she looks confused at the end. Like she is in deep thought.

hehe, if Lulu had a death list, he'd certainly be on it

Maybe so. But your opinion of it is from the outside looking in. Imagine BEING Rusty. Try to imagine how his experiences would have shaped who he is, shaped his internal thought-structures, and how they would color everything he sees in the world. Imagine what his capacity for compassion really is. Rough situations produce rough people. Conflict breeds callous. He probably has a limited perspective and understanding for anyone who isn't as tough as he is. We don't have to condone Rusty to understand him.

Not a bad page ... but it's not making me feel any sympathy for the guy either. "Only what you do matters, Rusty ... everything else is just a cheap excuse, meaningless to anyone other than yourself."

it vaguely reminds me of the story of Arya and Sandor in Game Of Thrones. (season 4)

Lux The Pegasus


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