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A Storm's Lullaby Page 150 (Updated)

Apologies for the delay! Here's Page 150.  And one very angry pony.

(Some small updates in the first two panels!)

A Storm's Lullaby Page 150 (Updated)

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Cheers!

"It's about little filly who lost her parents" , needs an 'a' before little. Sorry, been busy and only just catching up now.

Steve Lynx (Boulder)

hehe ^^

Heh, he still is pretty young :-)

Wow, was Thistle always such a badass? Giving both Tempest and her brother a well-deserved verbal smackdown. Fireweed complaining about this not being fair, makes him sound less like a grieving stallion who lost his father and more like an angry child who’s mad that Tempest destroyed his favorite toy. ^^

NTG

I did consider that panel to be like this. Maybe I will redo it.

I wonder if Fizzy's going to throw that last sentence back at her ... Fizzy's really tame in these panels considering her earlier mental state. There are so many panels already that it's probably impossible, but I would've liked to see something like one last threatening flash of red in her eyes following her statement in the second panel ...

Airhead is used to mean "one who's head is full of air" Which is to say: "Someone who fails to think through something fully"

Airhead ??? I don't know if Thistle really means what she says to Tempest. between the fact that we want his life, the fact that we scared his daughter, the fact that we tried to corrupt her and the fact that his daughter is kidnapped (and there Rusty is really going to be tortured. ) I am absolutely not surprised that she goes crazy. when we take the time to take a deep breath the last sentence would be more "it's time to calm down." although it's not over yet.

Lux The Pegasus

"Commander Tempest Shadow" - It's never a good sign when somepony uses your full name. Usually a verbal asskicking follows in short order. :D

Myrkin


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