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A Storm's Lullaby Page 120

Don't judge Lulu too harshly, she simply doesn't know any better. 

On this rather unhappy note we are ending Book 3 and also the slice of life part of our story. If the ending feels abrupt, don’t worry - Book 4 opens up with the direct follow up of this scene.

I am currently tidying up the last 40 pages to publish them as PDF.  Also you can now order DELUXE printed EDITION here: https://forms.gle/qqPuHCSEb8V5BNTE7 


A Storm's Lullaby Page 120

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She pretty much does that in the latest page I have posted :)

It is really good parenting that Tempest makes Lullaby aware of when she's a brat. That makes it a tangible thing for Lullaby and something she can resent. I would expect soon that Lullaby talks about herself that way too. Like "Oh no, I was being a brat again"

She was the bullied one, not a bully.

I kind of want to see some images of Lullaby bullying some others. She did admit that she has done that.

It's not exactly rational. She's hurting and currently Thistle is the reason. She's like that kid who needs a hug but still pushes a parent away in anger.

I find it kind of strange Lullaby is screaming "Go away" when that is exactly what she is afraid of. I would think she would scream something more like: "It's not fair!" "I have done everything you asked of me!" "You're being mean!" "You all hate me!"

@dSana too, should be 'lemme' contraction for 'let me'.

Steve Lynx (Boulder)

Things are going to be slightly less predictable :3

This is precisely why she's throwing a tantrum.

*ending book 3* ...if the next book starts with Rust Wing foalnapping Lulu again right off the bat, I swear to God...

Double R Forrest

so that she does not escape and drink them, or the wolf will catch her, the funniest thing is what this cons say alone with Thistle who says that she is old enough to sleep on her own, Lulu doesn't want to and leaves us "I'm not a kid anymore" beyond his, I can't get Lemmie to translate, instead of his I come across a German town

Lux The Pegasus

Plus having to sleep on her own might feel like is a start of losing what Lulu gained in Thistle and Tempest: loving parents. Being able to sleep with them together was a sign for her that they were close, while getting her own room might seem in her mind like T&T are distancing themselves from her. She might be afraid how far this distancing might go. Will they stop loving her? Will they tell her to leave? Will they take her to her unkind aunt?

Myrkin


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